Insight by cereza

sheila Marks
08/06/2008 05:10 am
Doctor Jekyll         
this is a wonderful story I wish that i could read the rest

Belle
07/01/2008 04:40 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
This is a great story! I just love this last chapter! As much of a Spuffy fan as I am, I kinda don't want them getting together in this story..don't know why...just seems like Spike has moved on and everything and besides, Buffy had a chance to find Spike before, I mean it can't always be him that does the chasing. *sigh* Anyways! Great story! Can't wait for the next update! =]

12/12/2007 05:03 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
Now that was FUN!!!

12/11/2007 06:03 am
Doctor Jekyll         
fun fun, more more, please please

nmcil
12/10/2007 08:37 am
Doctor Jekyll         
great update -

12/10/2007 12:00 am
Doctor Jekyll         
BITCH! Buffy is stagnated...not matured one iota. Sigh.....then again even Xander hasn't grown in spite of Spike having saved the world.

I want Kennedy removed from her position as "captain"...she never deserved it to begin with. Jenna is right, she is creating Slayers bound to be killed.

Can we just kill off the scoobies and let Spike and his girls run things LOL.

Kathleen

Kelly
12/09/2007 03:32 am
Doctor Jekyll         
I am sooo happy to see this update!!! I just love this story and am glad the spuffyness has begun!!!

12/08/2007 09:26 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
very good read, thank you. loved the shy and gentle smiles, and then the yelling,

Mot
12/08/2007 07:52 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
Another great chapter cant wait to see what happens with the buffy spike reunion keep up the great work cant wait for the next chapter.

jan
12/08/2007 07:29 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
I love this story... so glad you updated. Just a couple of nitpicky things. I think Dawn's eyes are blue and I think this sentence "First, this training circus, then a pointless fight, and now she was going to answer to a blonde, who looked as if thinking foreign was to her." should be "First, this training circus, then a pointless fight, and now she was going to answer to a blonde, who looked as if thinking was foreign to her."

Thank you for being such a careful reader. You're right, Dawn's eyes are of course blue (however, I had to see Michelle's photo to make sure - somehow I convinced myself that she's brown-eyed). And this second mistake - it was sheer carelessness. But thanks to you it's alright now! *hugs*

anon462
12/08/2007 06:02 pm
Doctor Jekyll         
Love this story!!! Can't wait for more!!! Soon??? Please???

nmcil
12/10/2007 08:17 am
Little Things and Nifty Tricks         
Hey - I like these two characters and it is really great to have new people in the story and you have plenty of storytime to get back to Buffy and Spike.

11/10/2007 04:04 am
Little Things and Nifty Tricks         
No worries. Love Carrie and Jenna and they needed fleshing...good job on that BTW! Spuffy comes to those who wait *G*.

Love reading Kennedy get whooped....more please and take her authority from her PLEASE!!!!! I've disliked her (not the actress though) from the start! For Willow to go from Tara to HER!?!?!?!?!

Excellent.

KAthleen

11/10/2007 01:51 am
Little Things and Nifty Tricks         
very, very good read, thank you. when you focus on spuffy, please don't neglect carrie and jenna. they are taking on a live of their own.

Kelly
11/08/2007 02:56 am
Little Things and Nifty Tricks         
please hurry, I love this story!! and kennedy getting her ass kicked!!

All4Spike
10/26/2007 04:23 am
Fight Club         
Why have I only just found this wonderful fic? I absolutely adore Jenna and Carrie and isn't it just typical of Spike to take teenage girls under his wing and protest all the time that he shouldn't?
And yes, I totally agree that it's high time someone should take that biatch Kennedy down a peg or six.
More please.

10/25/2007 06:47 am
Fight Club         
very good read, thank you. please, let her take kennedy down a peg (or a dozen.)

anon
10/24/2007 04:41 pm
Fight Club         
continung to enjoy this. hoping Kennedy gets her ass kicked

Tamara
10/23/2007 07:01 am
Fight Club         
Please tell me Kennedy is gonna get her ass kicked!

10/23/2007 05:39 am
Fight Club         
Oh do DO DO DO let Jenna kick Kennedy's rosy arse all the way to tomorrow!!!!! I dispise her and her "Trained" self and attitude.

Love the update and more reveals of the back story.

Kathleen

Mot
10/23/2007 02:18 am
Fight Club         
Another great chapter cant wait for the next one keep up the great work

Kelly
10/23/2007 01:57 am
Fight Club         
What a delight!! I really enjoy this fic and look forward to reading your chapter updates. This is really great!!

10/09/2007 06:45 pm
Sisterhood         
I really do love your original characters here. You are making very viable three dimensional players on the scene and they fit nicely. Well done!

Kathleen

10/09/2007 02:16 am
Sisterhood         
enjoy the relationship between carrie and jenna. seems extremely strong for a matter of a year or so. carrie's influence or spike's? very good read, thank you.

10/08/2007 03:45 am
Sisterhood         
Thanks ever for the update - like your two girls.

Kelly
10/08/2007 12:25 am
Sisterhood         
I find your fic interesting and will be watching for an update!

anon
10/07/2007 04:16 pm
Sisterhood         
i like this alot

Mot
09/19/2007 08:14 am
Now I'm Alive and Now I'm Not         
Just started reading the story when I saw it on the updates page and the summary intriged me and I'm extremely glad I did. This is an awesome story and I cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Tamara
09/18/2007 06:55 am
Now I'm Alive and Now I'm Not         
I say we hunt down her watcher and beat the crap out of him!~

07/18/2007 07:06 am
Night of the Living Dead         
Just started reading this and really enjoying it completely. Love the two girls under Spike's wing. I can easily see him in this role. Wish the idiots at the Hyperion would stop the in fighting and just be glad to have the backup. Will be interesting to have Buffy and Spike finally talk....that is if they do! I imagine Dawn might be jealous of Carrie and Jenna too.

Kathleen

07/17/2007 03:27 am
Night of the Living Dead         
Great update. Poor Jenna, no wonder she's so skittish! I'm surprised she's still in school. Looking forward to more.

anon462
07/17/2007 02:26 am
Night of the Living Dead         
Another excellent update!!!

Whoever Jenna's Watcher was he must have been a complete novice and a coward too. Trying to protect her town all on her own without any help must have been terrifying for a 13 year old.

Now that she's met Spike she is all confused. They have a truce, but no trust. She'll learn better in the future.

(Sorry your going to be gone, but hope you have a good holiday, and come back with more new chapters!!!)

07/17/2007 12:56 am
Night of the Living Dead         
Ooh, I love the backstory. Can't wait to read how Jenna got from not trusting Spike to training with him. Good job!

anon462
07/15/2007 10:59 pm
Trust Issues         
I love your OC's!!! Both Jenna and Carrie are wonderful to read. The way Spike interacts with them is great. When he sighs, he thinks that it somehow makes him weaker? To me it just shows how strong he is to carry the responsibilities he feels for them, and the love.

07/15/2007 05:03 am
Trust Issues         
This story is really intriguing. I like Carrie and Jenna. Of course, I am partial to anyone who treats Spike well.

07/14/2007 11:11 pm
Trust Issues         
spike and his girls appear to relate more easily than the groups they have come to help. very good read, thank you.

07/14/2007 11:11 pm
Trust Issues         
spike and his girls appear to relate more easily than the groups they have come to help. very good read, thank you.

07/14/2007 11:09 pm
Trust Issues         
spike and his girls appear to relate more easily than the groups they have come to help. very good read, thank you.

Dar
07/14/2007 03:51 pm
Trust Issues         
Spike makes a great Watcher love the interaction of Spike and his girls.

07/14/2007 02:29 am
Trust Issues         
Thanks for the update. Great chapter and still quite intriguing. Love the realtionship between Spike and the girls. He is such a softy!

Tel
06/29/2007 03:09 pm
Secrets and Lies         
Fabulous story. Lots more please - pretty please.

anon462
06/23/2007 05:07 pm
Secrets and Lies         
Excellent chapter!!! The Scoobies, as always, think they are in charge and that they always know what's "right". Xander is still, and always, a bigot. Giles has his head up his arse, as usual. Willow is a twit. And Buffy? She seems so detached from everything? It's almost painful.

Spike seems to hate them all, (except Fred) but still he came back to help save the world, again. Liked the background information on how Carrie and Jenna met. (Can't wait for more of that!!!)

seductive danger
06/22/2007 01:07 am
Secrets and Lies         
you need to update as soon as POSSIBLE, please!!!!!

you story is excellent

06/22/2007 12:05 am
Secrets and Lies         
Continue to love this story! Thanks for the background explanation and I'm looking forward to seeing hwat happens next.

06/21/2007 10:20 pm
Secrets and Lies         
xander always was a jerk. giles has a very selective memory. wonder if anyone realizes spike is not serious. very good read, thank you.

daniel_nieves
06/21/2007 07:21 pm
Secrets and Lies         
good chapter. I'm so glad Spike kinda of dissed Buffy there and made her feel bad.

05/28/2007 02:41 pm
Meet the Girls         
I love that Spike kept Carrie to keep her safe. I wonder what the deal is with the other girl. Interesting to see everyone's response to Spike's arrival. Especially Buffy and her seeming jealousy towards the other girl.

Pin
05/25/2007 04:35 pm
Meet the Girls         
Beautiful! THis is a very nice, unusual story. I like your ne characters. You Giles is expectedly ubnoxious and arrogant. Looking forward to more. Thanks!

05/25/2007 02:02 am
Meet the Girls         
giles has been running the council for too long he is becoming travers. if carrie shares with spike, he can really enjoy his stay in la. very good read, thank you.

tucker_t
05/24/2007 11:52 am
Meet the Girls         
I'm so glad you started this up again. I'm waiting with bated breath to see where Spike and Carrie go with this.

05/24/2007 11:50 am
Meet the Girls         
oh please tell me they are not sleeping together and he will work everything out with Buffy, I really want to continue this fic, but I can't read Spike others unless like season 2 or 4 things like that. I will try to stick with it.
Oh no! C'mon, this is PG-13 rated fic posted on a Spuffy site I tried really hard to make it clear that he feels all paternal towards the girls. So don't you worry.

anon462
05/24/2007 05:15 am
Meet the Girls         
Excellent Chapter!!! I really like the way your writing the characters.

daniel_nieves
05/24/2007 03:54 am
Meet the Girls         
Great chapter. Can't will till the next update.

04/08/2007 11:03 pm
Enter the Vampire         
Well, guess she did stay with him after all but what is their relationship? Friends, lovers are they mated? So many question scared to know the answers. Hope you'll be updating again soon. Great read, thanks.

04/07/2007 08:00 am
Enter the Vampire         
seems spike has his own team. fun read, thank you.

04/06/2007 10:36 pm
Enter the Vampire         
oh woww....can't wait to see where this goes from here, love...excellent chapters so far

04/06/2007 04:47 pm
Enter the Vampire         
Nothing quite like a Spike grand entrance.

Dar
04/06/2007 01:40 pm
Enter the Vampire         
Nice story loved Spike's entrance

smlcspike
04/06/2007 01:26 pm
Enter the Vampire         
I wonder who is with him and what happened to him loving Buffy, please tell me they get together, I am not a fan of Spike others.

Chomodog
04/06/2007 08:48 am
Enter the Vampire         
Hey ! A great idea for a story.I have enjoyed your first chapters very much.Keep up the good work

SpaceLord
04/06/2007 08:14 am
Enter the Vampire         
Well a very interesting start, this should be good I think.

Kate
04/06/2007 07:29 am
Enter the Vampire         
Cool start. I really like the premise of this story and am really interested to see how you play it out. I actually buy the fact that the LA gang and the Sunnydale-controlled Watcher's Council would actually have had no contact for the last several years. I love Wes' thoughts about some of that. I also really love Buffy's thoughts about how things post-Sunnydale aren't hunky-dory for her and she does miss the old ways. That is very fitting of the Buffyverse and Joss' philosphy that happiness only last for so long.

There were two moments though that felt very out of character for me. The first one is the exchange between Gunn and Buffy. I didn't understand her dislike of him or his weird, rather rude behavior towards her. Cannon-wise they've never met so why would Gunn be mean to her? It felt like a very false conversation between them and totally out of character as well.

The other moment is the arguement between Wes and Giles. I know that they had their tiffs and minor battles over authority when in Sunnydale, but I don't think there is any indication that they would have this much animosity towards each other. Maybe Wes would due to the whole Fred/Illyria situation, but you didn't bring that up in Wes' thoughts or words in that scene, which would have helped in my opinion. I'm not saying that Wes and Giles wouldn't butt heads because they definitely could, especially under the pressure they are and being exhausted, but it just didn't work for me in this version.

I feel like there are details of info missing that maybe you are planning on explaining later and that's partly why I'm a bit confused. But maybe not. Either way, it just may be something to consider.

Looking forward to more. Like I said, really great start!

04/06/2007 05:55 am
Enter the Vampire         
lmao leave it up to spike to make a show stopping entrance. more please

anon462
04/06/2007 04:50 am
Enter the Vampire         
Really liking this story so far!!! Looking forward to finding out who the girls are with Spike. Can't wait for the next update. Excellent!!!

Tamara
04/06/2007 04:06 am
Enter the Vampire         
Great story. I can't wait to see how Buffy and Spike interact.

LadyYashka
04/06/2007 03:38 am
Enter the Vampire         
I like how you've got everything set up. On one side you've got the organised army of Wolfram and Hart, and on the other you've got the fractured army of AI and The Slayers. Then you've tossed Spike into the mix. It looks like things are about to get messy.
So nice start and I'm looking forward to the rest.

Nichole
04/06/2007 02:48 am
Enter the Vampire         
Just finished your story so far and i'm liking it alot...i look forward to more soon..N

04/08/2007 10:44 pm
Apocalypse, Now         
wow, two years have gone by and I'm afraid Carrie may have wormed her way into his life. He always did go in for the damsel in distress type. Guess I'll find out. Holding my breath and waiting to see, thanks.

04/07/2007 07:47 am
Apocalypse, Now         
go fred. (possibly my favorite character from the angel series.) fun read, thank you.

04/06/2007 10:09 pm
Apocalypse, Now         
awwww, i love spike/fred friendship....i'm so glad she's calling him...great chapter, love

Cas
04/06/2007 02:55 am
Apocalypse, Now         
Great note.

12/10/2007 01:16 am
Prologue         
A little creepy picking up little girls off the street, Spike. Hope Carrie is creepy too.

04/08/2007 10:34 pm
Prologue         
Very odd, is she a seer? Sounds like Dana, receiving the thoughts of the past slayers including Buffy. Is that why she remembers him and loves him? Very interesting, can't wait to get caught up, thanks.

04/07/2007 07:38 am
Prologue         
now that you have our attention, please continue. very good beginning, thank you.

04/06/2007 10:06 pm
Prologue         
hmmm...very intriguing start....do they know each other from before i wonder, or is this first meeting? it's a bit hard to say -- is that intentional? anyway, i'm already fascinated off to read more

04/06/2007 05:43 am
Prologue         
great start.very differnt. can't wait for more.

Cas
04/06/2007 02:50 am
Prologue         
Intriguing beginning. Of course I thought you were writing Buffy at first, but I suppose that was your intent.