A Visit to the Loo by Ariel Dawn

05/19/2014 11:54 pm
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I just wish I could watch!

Blue

09/17/2013 06:54 pm
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Totally can see this happening!   I love ficlets that portend.

Eskarina
10/12/2008 08:20 am
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mmm nice
it was unexpected and very enjoyable to have each of them ask "why did you love me?" 
Thanks for reading!

07/14/2007 09:53 am
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This was really cool. I've never seen a fic that addressed the why they thought they loved each other during the spell. Really sweet and cool. I hope you do a sequel. I'd like to see what happens when they do finally consummate it.
Thanks!

07/14/2007 09:42 am
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This was really cool. I've never seen a fic that addressed the why they thought they loved each other during the spell. Really sweet and cool. I hope you do a sequel. I'd like to see what happens when they do finally consummate it.
I have no plans to do a sequel. Thanks though.

05/10/2007 04:33 am
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delightful read, thank you.
Thanks for reading!

05/10/2007 01:42 am
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I LOVED this. How sweet and nice and she left Spike sheechless at the end, lol. I was rollin when he unzipped his pants, so very Spike. Really loved this.
Glad you like!

05/09/2007 05:02 pm
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Ah that was really sweet and nicely written. Really liked it.

How about a sequel? Or many sequels? C'mon it's just begging for one!
Sorry, no sequels for this one. I'm up to my ears in sequels already. lol

05/09/2007 03:15 pm
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hehehe!

Loved it!
Thanks!

05/09/2007 10:19 am
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Hee! Very cute.
Thanks!

05/09/2007 04:30 am
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Hee, cute! Will there be a sequel?
Not planning a sequel at present.

05/09/2007 01:07 am
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Brilliant fun! I really enjoyed that.
Thanks!

05/09/2007 12:13 am
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Ooh...I really enjoyed this. A lovely character study, and funny and sexy too. More? Maybe? Please?
Thanks for the review. I am not planning to add to this fic.

Cas
05/08/2007 11:59 pm
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Cute and funny. Thanks
Thanks for reading!

sour
05/08/2007 08:46 pm
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come on it is not finished!!!!! is it? Don't leave it here please..
It's finished. I wrote it as a one shot. perhaps one day... Thanks for the review!