† beneath you † by AJ Hofacre

Raesi
01/12/2015 01:48 pm
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More please!!!

Theresa
02/22/2014 09:28 pm
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Good story so far;   I hope you will be able to finish this and tie up all of the loose ends.     Such as, does Xander ever come around, or does he continue to hate Spike without reason?    Will Giles accept Buffy's relationship with Spike?    How about Willow?    Will Anya and Xander ever get along again?   Is there a romantic future for anyone (including Buffy/Spike)???

I truly enjoyed these 13 chapters, and hope to read more.   Thank you for sharing yourtalent with the rest of us.

10/03/2010 10:24 pm
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please please finish the story i am hooked     Krissi xxx

Tips
02/23/2010 04:36 am
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10/10
Absolutely love the whole series.  Totally hope there will be more coming.
Thanks so much for sharing your writing!!! 

astarstillunborn
09/24/2009 10:12 pm
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loove it please write more...feed my need for more spuffy
plllleeeaaassssseeee????

thanks

Cate
08/18/2008 03:34 pm
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FINALLY!!! Gosh Buffy's an idiot! I really enjoy this story. I love entertaining season 7 fics because there rarely is a well written one. But I adore yours. Its fun with just the right amount of angst. At first I didn't like the whole Buffy blaming the attempted rape on herself, because that's just a terrible thought (in no ways is rape a condonable act), which sadly a lot of people do. Although I could see where you were going with the idea, as a lot of Spike fans do take that perspective on the act, me agreeing with some perspectives, but not all. Characterisation is very well done, and I can't wait to read more! Well Done! Please, Pleeaase Update!  

04/24/2008 05:52 am
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NICE WORK - Hope that you will have a new chapter very soon - very much enjoyed reading thus far.

04/21/2008 04:25 am
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delightful buffy and spike scene. very good chapter, thank you.

Jodi
04/19/2008 08:16 pm
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OMG.
your an amazing ryter.

PLEASEE. do some more soon :)
and if you dont mind,
mail me when you do at,
x.x.jj.x.x@hotmail.com

i wish i had your skill
lmao.
iv been looking all over the net for a good story line

+ iv finaly found one :)
I WANT MOREE.
;D

kathyshop
04/17/2008 02:10 am
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Loved playful Buffy and Spike.  Good chapter!

Also enjoyed the story of Lilith.

fan
04/17/2008 12:57 am
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Oooo yes more please! And hopefully another chapter very soon...yes?

04/16/2008 11:23 pm
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Well, that was truly excellent! Loved their playfulness! Looking forward to more soon!

Veronica
04/16/2008 09:17 pm
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Awesome chapter, as always.  I really liked the way that you gave us the info on Lilith's background, not to mention the fluffiness.  (What can I say, I like it when they make up!)  Anyways, can't wait to read more!

Bridget
04/16/2008 08:13 pm
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I liked this chapter very much.  It was a very good explanation of where Lilith came from.  I can't imagine what will happen next.  I always like spuffy make up chapters and this was very well done.  Welcome back after 4 years.   I hope that your muse will not wait another 4 years before updating this chapter.  

Veronica
10/23/2009 06:46 am
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I really love this story. I'm a big Spuffy fan and it almost ruined my world when I didn't got that romantic ending in BTVS last episode.

04/24/2008 05:15 am
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Great chapter - I always liked the Lilith story -

04/21/2008 04:02 am
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finally buffy lets some of what she feels come out. very good read, thank you.

Kate
04/14/2008 03:01 pm
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I read this story some time ago and I liked it very much. I'm glad to see you will continue it, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Oh, it's being continued whether it likes it or not :)

jess
04/05/2008 11:51 pm
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omg i can't wait for more.
It's coming soon :)

04/05/2008 10:27 pm
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excellent....more more!
:-)
Glad you enjoyed it, no name :)

04/05/2008 08:51 pm
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Wonderful update; as always.  So glad Buffy was finally able to share at least some of her true feelings.  Spike was wonderful!  Can't wait for the next update!
Aww :) Thanks! You won't be waiting too long, hopefully!

10/14/2008 11:23 pm
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Poor buffy =(

04/21/2008 03:40 am
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it is very fortunate that buffy is incapable of simply stating the truth. if she could communicate.we would be deprived of  a great portion of this fine read. great chapter, thank you.

04/03/2008 05:23 pm
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So glad to see such a nice long chapter, filled with wonderful details! Can't wait for more!
Aww, thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed! And keep your eyes out for more! Thanks!

10/14/2008 10:56 pm
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Jealously makes for the good. Spike shouldn't feel guilty, buffys fault eh?

04/21/2008 02:55 am
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lilith! seems a fitting adversary for buffy. although her mightiest opponent is herself. very good chapter, thank you.

03/31/2008 02:38 am
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Glad your muse is being so kind to you and giving us such great updates!  Can't wait for more soon.
The ball is definitely starting to roll :) Keep reading! Thanks!

10/14/2008 10:17 pm
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Oh yeah man this story is 1 of the best I read so far, comedy, drama, suspense, action, romance it has it all :)

04/21/2008 02:10 am
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it is bad enough that buffy could be that (insert word of choice: stupid, dumb, afraid, dumb, insecure, dumb, etc) but now something powerful and evil is going to screw with the situation. very good read, thank you.

Shanna
03/29/2008 04:55 pm
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I just looked at your LJ where you said that you're disappointed in the number of reviews at Bloodshedverse.  I am quite sure that many readers head over to other places where you post and review there.   Your stories and writing skills are appreciated.  You give excellent  Spuffy **winks**.

I tend to wait until a number of chapters build up and then dive into a fic.  Love this one although I can't believe you have just added a new and different obstacle to the Spuffy loving besides Buffy and her inability to move forward and express her feelings.  Oh well, the road to the loving part will be bumpy but well worth it !!
Well thank you :) But I love reviews just as much as the next author, good or bad... okay, well, maybe not so much the bad, but I love reviews, and I love it when I GET reviewed. Not too many people do that anymore, and it's sort of sad. Don't you guys WANT to boost our egos? ~_^

And of COURSE I added an obstacle to the loving. I reserve my right as the author to drive you all positively mad ~_^ And the lovins, when we get to them, will be much more than worth it. Thanks for the review!

jess
03/28/2008 08:27 pm
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oh boy who the hell is that. and what is wrong with buffy aragh makes me wanna scream.
Buffy is dumb.

That's pretty much all there is to know. Hey, I gotta torture you guys somehow, right?

Thanks for the review!

03/28/2008 06:38 pm
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Oh my, very interested to see what or who this new evil is!  I can't believe Buffy held her tongue!  More soon, please?
At this point, Buffy's not really all that smart :/ Sorry about that. She knows what she wants, she's just scared of what might happen if she admits to it and receives it. And Spike ain't exactly making it easy for her :D Thanks for the review! More coming soon :)

10/14/2008 09:33 pm
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Hilarious, couldn't stop laughing

Veronica
03/25/2008 09:58 pm
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hahahah I loved this chapter!  You capture their awkwardness in season 7 very well!
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

jess
03/25/2008 08:23 pm
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lol loved it on with the smoochies.
Hehe. I figured you guys would get a kick out of it :)

03/25/2008 06:42 pm
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Great chapter...looking forward to more soon!
thank you!

03/25/2008 01:46 am
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progress! excellent read, thank you.
Heh, yup :) Thanks for the revie!

03/22/2008 12:18 am
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Catching up on my reading and want to say how much I am enjoying this. 

You were right about Xander...it is easy to forget all the good in him, good he's done. 

Yes she's dreaming and now Spike knows.  Will become interesting.

Kathleen
Although it doesn't stop anyone from wanting to punt Xander in the head for being an ignorant and biased.prejudiced sod. Thanks for the review :)

03/16/2008 11:17 pm
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I loved thise two chapters. Really great work, as far too many Spuffy authors just focus on the negative of everyone else and not the positive, particularly Xander.
Oh, believe me, I didn't want to at first. I wanted to completely tear Xander down, but my beta forced me to take a step back and look at it from how Buffy might. And since one of the voices in my head for this story IS Buffy, I did what she said. And I realized -- it was the truth. Xander may be a bigoted ass, but she DID owe a lot to him -- for one thing, if it wasn't for him, she might be dead, because God knows Angel was useless. :)

Thanks for the review :)

10/14/2008 08:05 pm
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OOOoooooooo suspense

03/24/2008 11:49 pm
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dawn's seems to have stolen a major part of this tale, and i really enjoy that. thanks for the fun read.
Again, what can I say? I like Dawn :) She'll fade in and out a little, but that's natural for characters. Thanks for the review!

03/24/2008 09:27 pm
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dawn is doing well at keeping spike's secret, but looks like it will be coming out now.  good update, thank you.
Yuppers... it was bound to happen! Thanks for the review ^_^

03/15/2008 04:55 am
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Wow, I really like this one. Hehehe...Seth Green and James Marsters...nice little easter egg you put in there.
I figured it'd be a cute little prezzie to pop in there :) Thanks for the review :)

03/24/2008 08:59 pm
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dawn at her best. very good read, thank you.
Say what you will about Dawn... she's probably one of the easiest characters to write, and she's fun to boot :) Thanks for the review!

jess
03/13/2008 01:09 am
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i am happy to go along for the ride just one request a happy ending..
Heh. No offense, but duh :) Of course there'll be a happy ending, it'll just take a bit to get there. This is a crossover special, which means we'll be seeing some familiar-- and maybe not-so-familiar -- face popping in to mess with our favorite couple :)

03/24/2008 08:21 pm
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way to start a reunion. good chapter, thank you.
Aww, thanks :)

03/25/2008 05:25 pm
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Wow, off to an angsty start.  Anxious to read more.
Well, this was originally intended to be angst. Then again, it was also intended to be a one-shot until people started yelling at me for more :) Thanks for the review!

03/24/2008 08:05 pm
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are you going to make this year absolute hell?  very good opening chapter, thank you.
Oh... I think it will get to that point. Lots of ornery characters, goo, bad, slight moral ambiguity, that sort of thing :) And it's a crossover, which is even better! :) Thank you for the review :)