Changes by dreamweaver

04/13/2013 11:23 pm
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Great Story:)
I was really nervous about writing a sequel, but I wanted to explore what a claim would be like.  I'm so glad you liked it!

illona
07/23/2009 06:20 pm
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very nice conclusion
Thank you!  I'd never done a sequel before and was hesitant about it.

Niori
06/04/2009 07:25 am
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Again with the great fics (I'm reviewing Her way here too because I'm too lazy to leave two reviews).
Buffy bringing fourth her inner Faith was fun to read. The sexual inudendo banter you had going on between Buffy and Spike was bery in character and pretty hot. lol
My fav part was all the politics you wove into the story. They were really believable and made sense. Props.
And again, glad that you made sure that, despite the Spuffy, Dru was taken care of (I've always liked her) and as you pointed out before, Angel needs to take responsibility for her.
After 'His Way', I started wondering how Buffy would handle things.  :D 
Spike would never run out on anyone, unlike Angel who seems to make a habit of it.  He broke Dru's mind, turns her, then runs out on her when he gets his soul, never makes any effort to help.  I thought it was about time he took some responsibility.  I'm so glad you liked the stories!  Thank you!

IT
11/12/2008 11:55 pm
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Wow.  I've just read both stories and I loved them!  Great work.  Hope to see more in this verse.  Thanks for sharing.
I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I do have more ideas about this 'verse, but I won't be able to get around to them until my 2 present WIPS are completed, which might take a while.

Messiah
11/08/2008 12:14 pm
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I'm not completely finished. I read most up top and I realize that this is almost exactly the same as a religious war.

The council think that they are the rulers, the chosen men and Buffy is their tool.
If she doesn't fallow their beliefs than she just gets killed...
The truth is, Buffy is their god in this. and just like men do in reality, they kill and destroy in order to make god as they see fit.
The Council, especially Travers, really do seem to think they have the right to tell Slayers what to do.  While never really helping.  I really hated that they would sit there in their expensive building, drawing their expensive salaries, doing absolutely nothing useful while Buffy flips burgers (!)  They could easily have sent her some money to keep her going.

Shelby
05/28/2008 04:40 pm
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i love this story and it's prequel. their both amazing. it's everything i ever wanted in the show but it never happened so thanks for writting it and making it seem so real. gives me hope =D
great job
xoxo
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I do agree - that's what I wanted to happen on the show.  Fanfic does allow one to change things to the way one likes it!

spuffy chick
05/28/2008 05:39 am
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WOW!!! i loved it!  wish they did this too in the show... 
you're a very good writer! thanks for sharing this story with us....
I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I always wanted Buffy and Spike to be partners.  They would both have been so much happier.

05/06/2008 06:37 pm
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Yay!! *twirling twirling* Loved it!! :D It was wonderful to have a sequel! You did a wonderful job continuing the tale! I loved the connection through the claim! It was so intense and consuming! I felt like a voyour peeking in on their most honest moments .......*sigh*
I'm so glad you liked it!  I'd never done a sequel before, but I really wanted to explore how the claim would work for them.

05/06/2008 09:57 am
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Another wonderful adventure -
Thank you!  I'd never done a sequel before and I was worried that people might be disappointed.

Abby
04/22/2008 02:25 am
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I love it!!! Both parts of your story, it's a lot of fun!! Great work!! 
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!

04/18/2008 02:59 am
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wonderful read, thank you.
Thank you!  I'd never done a sequel or a story that was more action than romance, so I was very worried about it.  I'm delighted that you liked it!

claddagh
04/12/2008 12:33 am
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A sequel!  Oh, how much I loved it!  I did not want it to end.  Thanks for the sequel, and I look forward to seeing whatever you comeup with next. 

Thanks!!
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I'd never done a sequel before and was worried that people might be disappointed.  I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

jamalov29
04/11/2008 11:43 am
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Thank you very much for this wonderful story . I was very glad to see a sequel to 'Her way' which I enjoyed immensely and 'Changes ' was delightful all along.
It's such a dream coming true to see Buffy and Spike side by side, equals and in love.  And I enjoyed the fact that they work with the demons in Sunnydale , I like this idea .
Really beautiful, with amazing love scenes as well! *happy sigh*

Caroline.
Thank you so much!  I really wanted to show how it could be - the two of them working together and in love!  And I thought if Lorne and Clem could work with Buffy, other peaceful demons would as well.  The love scenes are so much fun to write!  I'm glad you like them!
Jo

Courtney
04/08/2008 07:17 pm
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It may be fluff, but it's darn good fluff! I've read all your stories and enjoyed every one. This sequel was great, seeing everyone's reactions is so much fun. I love Spike in this story, killing Travers for Buffy and totally unapologetic, It's great!
Oh, thank you so much for liking my work!  The reactions were so much fun to play with.  And Spike doesn't have a soul here, so even though he's trying not to be evil for Buffy, he's still essentially ruthless.

04/07/2008 11:51 pm
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Another very good fiction - love their new world. I'd say, if only it had been that way in the series, but then there would have been no need for fan fic. Really cool character developments.
I'm so glad you liked it!  I wish it had been that way on the series!  I really wanted to see the two of them together!

04/07/2008 02:19 pm
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*applauds wildly*; amazing story; lovely fluffy sequel; Buffy was enough of a badass, without being OOC; just love Spike; pragmatic, not really evil.  Can't wait to see more of your work!!!  Bring on those new stories!!!
Thank you so much!  You wouldn't believe how incredibly worried I was about this one, because I'd never done a sequel before.  I'm working on a couple of new stories and hope to have them up soon.

Gill
04/07/2008 12:51 pm
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Your usual wonderful uplifting work - really glad you got rid of Travers!  Can't wait for the next instalment
I'm so glad you like my work!  Thank you!  The next instalment will take a while, unfortunately.  I'm working on a couple of totally different stories that insist on being told, so they'll be up first - hopefully soon.

pearlseed
04/07/2008 09:28 am
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Thanks dear one for your charming interpretation of a time travel scenario.  Don't usually go for 'em, sure fell head over heels for this!!  The voices of the beloveds were spot on--what nice grown-up ways both Spike and Buffy exhibited.  Love the pace, transitions were flawless.
Oh, thank you so much!  I'm still new at writing and I'm still learning.  It's great to hear that I'm doing it right!  Time-travel is fun because one can play with scenarios and I use it a lot.  And I did want Buffy and Spike acting like the adults they are, instead of with the exasperating blinders the show insisted on placing on them.

anon462
04/07/2008 02:45 am
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Great story!!!  Would love to read a sequel. There's Faith coming to town and maybe Wesley, the mayor to deal with, the initiative after that. Lots of fun things you can write about!!!  :D
There really are so many other places this 'verse could go!  I'm working on that, but it will take a little while because I've got two other totally different stories going that have to be finished first.

All4Spike
04/07/2008 01:45 am
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Outstanding!
I just love the way you've used Buffy's foreknowledge and confident maturity to twist things just enough to make it 'good V evil' rather than 'humans V demons'.
I'd dearly love to see more fics in this 'verse. Please. Pretty please. With a cherry on top. And chocolate sprinkles...
I'm definitely looking into setting more stories in this 'verse.  But it will take a little time because I've got two other stories in the works that are just clamouring to be done!

04/06/2008 07:19 pm
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Oh, loved this!!!

Would it be too much if I asked for yet another sequel???
Oh, thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it enough to want more.  There are still places that this could go.  I'm working on a totally different story right now, and I've got another cooking that demands to be told.  But after those two, I should be able to go on with this.

Alizabeth
04/06/2008 04:50 pm
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lmao. That would have been so awesome if it had happened in the show! You're an awesome writer.
Thank you!  It would have been fun on the show, wouldn't it, even as a Wishverse or something.

04/06/2008 04:44 pm
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Wow - Buffy really has grown up!  Lovely story.
Thank you so much!  I wanted to show that Buffy, with six more years of painful experience, would have a far more adult and sensible perspective.

04/06/2008 04:20 pm
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Very creative and satisfying sequel!  I'm so glad you wrote it!
Oh, I'm so relieved you liked it!  I've never done a sequel before and I was truly worried that it would disappoint!

Tamara
04/06/2008 04:19 pm
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But wonderful fluff it tis. And I like the part of a matter of evil. In canon too many times it seemed like they were just protecting humans  no matter what.
It seemed that way to me too and it didn't seem right.  That's why that was the focus of this story.  Thank you for liking it!

Silver81
04/06/2008 08:29 am
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Thankyou  D, for creating this sequel to Her Way! I was just browsing around looking for a new story and happened to come here at just the right time to find this little jewel. So entertaining and spot on with the characters, especially Spike.  I hope you also continue on to a sequel of His Way... Please? I miss these characters less when I am reading good fanfiction, and You have it, Thankyou, for sharing it!
Thank you for liking it!  I've never written a sequel before and I was worried that people might be disappointed.  I don't think a sequel to 'His Way' would be possible; it seemed to end naturally at that point.  But I am working on a whole new story that I think you will like!

Messiah
11/08/2008 11:53 am
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OH NO!! But if Buffy lives forever than how will Faith be called?

You just HAVE to do another fic just like this, a sequel as I said and make it go from season three to 4 or something. please, you just gotta! Make it twist and turn and change as you like. I love your style!
But we can't lose faith!

But I guess being immortal does not mean she's impervious. she could still drown somehow and be revived and then Kendra (the lame slayer) would be called and then killed :D

Keep writing ^_^ I'll be following your work :)

Kendra was called when the Master drowned Buffy, before Spike arrived in Sunnydale.  So Buffy becoming immortal because of the claim wouldn't matter.  All that has to happen for Faith to be called is for Kendra to die and, since Kendra doesn't really think for herself, some demon could easily kill her off the way Dru did.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this so far!

04/18/2008 02:48 am
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you could have given xander to carla , as a pet or a meal. very good read, thank you.
He would have enjoyed it too much.  I wasn't going to do him any favors.

04/06/2008 04:43 pm
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Xander can be so hypocritical!
He never can resist demon girls, can he?  And then gives Buffy a hard time!

Messiah
11/08/2008 02:06 am
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Almost done reading all your stories :D Keep going! keep writing! I love what you write. This story should have a sequel or you should a least make another time travel one. And make the chapters bigger.. I don't want it to be over soo soon! I love it ^_^
'scuse meh but ahm terbly terbly drunk
I'm so glad you like my work!  Thank you!  I'll certainly be doing more time travel stories; I love those.  I'm working on another dimensional jump one right now and, yes, it will be long with longer chapters.  I'm almost done and I hope you'll like it when it's up.

04/18/2008 02:34 am
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what a fun read, thank you.
It was fun to write.  I hadn't tried action like this before and it was interesting to write.  I'm so relieved you liked it!

04/06/2008 04:41 pm
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I love the demon wheeling and dealing - neatly done.

That was so much fun to write!  New for me, because I'd been concentrating on romance before.

04/06/2008 03:32 pm
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I like the way you had Spike cut down the number of minions and then leave just a few "smart" ones and how they came to help fight the demons at Willies.  I wish they'd film the scene for a TV show where Spike introduces the Slayer to the vamps and they are all so polite to one another; that would be fun to see!  Buffy as overlord overseeing justice for the demons-great! You have a great imagination and are taking this story in unique directions that make it refreshing and different from any other fanfic I've read.
I'm absolutely delighted that you liked it!  I wanted something different because, since it's a sequel, there's no suspense about the romance and I was worried that people might get bored.  Thank you!

04/18/2008 02:02 am
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enjoying red's reaction. xander is a much better character when he is speechless. very good read, thank you.
Isn't he!  I loved writing all their reactions.  I'm so glad you liked it!

04/06/2008 04:37 pm
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Nice to see them getting on so well!!  Phew...
There were two ways to go in a sequel:  either break them up to allow suspense or carry on with their lives with no romantic suspense.  I couldn't bear to break them up!  I'm glad you like it anyway! 

Cas
04/06/2008 03:20 pm
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Tried to leave a review over at SR, but it wouldn't take for some reason.  Did it twice, so it wasn't that I typed that stupid code wrong.  Glad I found the story here - cause I really wanted to say thanks fror continuing the saga - and for posting it complete!
I'm so glad you liked it!  I was worried, because I'd never done a sequel before.  I get frustrated myself when stories aren't complete, so I always post mine that way to make it easier for readers.