Intervention by Immortal

jagzz
08/05/2012 04:07 am
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Very cool. It's been a while but, come on, tell me you're gonna finish this. This is one of my favorite episodes and I love fanfic about it.  Please complete this fic - it's really good.

07/06/2008 10:50 pm
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great chapter. would love to read more :)

zombiegirl
05/25/2008 08:59 pm
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Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amost execellent chapter. Looking forward to more.

05/25/2008 02:34 am
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that last statement is so buffy. very good read, thank you.

05/24/2008 02:30 pm
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I Like!  Keep going, its going to be interesting!

05/23/2008 03:28 pm
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Thanks for a fabulous update! Loving her conflict, yet she can't seem  to stay away! Looking forward to more!

05/23/2008 12:06 am
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Poor confused couple!  Tee hee...we all know WHY she did it, they are the only clueless ones.  Love his comment on blow for blow Slayer choices LOL.

Kathleen

05/25/2008 02:30 am
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fun start. would have been a great one-shot, but makes a fantastic opening chapter.

05/18/2008 05:45 pm
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Awesome! And very hot. Now that would have been a way to make him feel better...

05/17/2008 03:44 am
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Loved the end of the chapter. You had me laughing out loud :D

05/17/2008 01:50 am
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Wow!   Very nice for a first fanfic. 

fangfaceandrea
05/16/2008 07:28 pm
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lol

05/16/2008 07:06 pm
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Brilliant start. Can't wait for the next update and what Spike will do.

05/16/2008 05:26 pm
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Hot scene!  Oh yeah you can run .... LOL. 

Looking forward to more.  Glad you decided to jump in the Spuffy waters...nice offering!

Kathleen

Ivy
05/16/2008 10:48 am
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I hope she doesn't take it back and say it never happened. Cant wait to see what happens next!

05/16/2008 03:06 am
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That was fun!

05/16/2008 12:49 am
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Uh Oh! I do believe she's been caught! Well done!

June
05/16/2008 12:48 am
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I really like reading how a scene looked from the character's POV and you did a great job. great how Buffy had to cut off Spike's line about bending her over...--!! Good story. Thanks for sharing it :)

05/16/2008 12:44 am
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Oh, the timing!  Great start. I loved how you showed Buffy's thoughts during the scene, so it wasn't just another rewrite of what we saw on-screen. Effective to make us pay attention to the moment and realistic with Buffy's reactions... and what led to the last act. And of course Spike would realize something! Looking forward to seeing how you show the repercussions, and what will Spike think later? Not to mention Buffy! Does the fact that he kept saying her name mean anything to her? How will things change from canon and what will we see?
So many questions, really wanting to know how you choose to answer!