pity. i actually really liked this and wouldve liked to have seen more. nevertheless this was a lovely oneshot. =] 

    You bloodless bint! I think I'd like a bit more of this. Can't you just give it away, yeah?

Slinky - I can see how you wouldn't want to work on this anymore, because it would certainly make me way too depressed.  If you were going to work on it, though, you need to write out all this stuff rather than summarizing.  It would make a great novel length story of Buffy's revenge with maybe a sequel on what Buffy does after she becomes a vampire.

Short but scary, poignant, powerful and excellent -

I have to try and do an image based on this piece -

I'm not much of an angst lover m'self but this one-shot was brilliant and very well written.

Well done you. :-)

wow!!!! i've have to say i don't like dark and angst fics, they made me uncomfortable and sad so i try not to read them....but when i read what this one was about i couldn't help myself and read it, and i really liked it!!!!i think it is very well written, the end was good and kind of unexpected although it made sense in a very sad way.... you did a great job!!!!

very good read, thank you. considering how uncomfortable you are with this type of fic, the result deserves even higher praise. thanks, again.