Oh oh oh - please let it be Xander and let Buffy kick his butt. 

Finally catching up on favorite stories.

Ooooooo who could it be???  This is a tense cliff hanger.  My mind boggles...could it be Riley?

Glad they are all witness to the goings on for so many reasons.  It should be clear to all that these two are in a relationship and Xander needs to back the heck off!  I much prefer this story to how they went on the show. 

Excellent.

Kathleen

ummmm, i hope you are not sitting there reading reviews when you should be writing so I can find out what is happening!!!  lol--sorta. what a great story and I can't wait for the update

Hmm...must be Xander.

aw, cliffie! dang! lovely chappie on the whole though. really like the emotion in the story.

God save us - it's another 'protector'!

oooh - evil cliffhanger! Just when it seemed that Spike was making progress. ;)

Very exciting chapter - hoping you'll update soon, let us know who this intruder is!

I know some fics have Spike's chip work in different ways, like working on his intent to hurt. so either he thought of hurting whoever came in, understandable at the interruption, or whoever came in was able to make the chip go off, or something I'm totally missing and will be pleasantly surprised by in the next chapter.... Oh, who knows but I look forward to finding out!

love it please update soon