Okay, first of all, continuation of the lovely babies scene. Brilliant.

Secondly, I now hate Kennedy with a passion.

Thirdly, you sure know how to ramp it up! I think you got the suspense, tension and thrills down just perfect these last few chapters!

Well, I've read through chapter 25 but the rest aren't available on this site...due to, I think, a site error.  Please tell me this is posted somewhere else.  I can't wait to see how it continues!  amaradangeli@inbox.com

Been reading this for such a very long time - and while I wish updates came sooner - I always feel completely satisfied with the new chapters.  This has been on my "favs" list for a longtime.

Know that it is a project that you will need a big rest period from, but I sure would like to read more about the other vamp characters, see what happens when their part, and Faith's new connections, has finished in this work. 

Writing stories based on new characters is something that I think ff writers don't take advantage of - the Buffyverse FF is more than firmly established and has a firm fan base, there is room for writers to expand their works to bring in new characters and do long works for them. 

Totally lived up to my expectations! All the players are in place, now comes the fireworks.

It took me a while to actually get to sit down and read it.  This was definitely worth the wait.  I am so glad that she made it.  Both of the kids made it safe and sound.  I can just imagine how anamated the little boy is.  And how such a daddy's girl the little girl will be.  I am a little suprised that Xander actually showed up.  How is he going to help them?  And the doctor was flown in.  I don't see Spike wanting to leave his family so soon.  And the little snippet of Giles and Anya.  Awesome chapter to a great story and saga.

totally worth the wait - but please, don't make us wait too long for the next one.  I love the mid wife character and how you have used all the characters from the series plus the new characters you introduced. 

 

Most definitely worth the wait! I'm glad Xander is back in the picture but if Kennedy and Willow end up together I may lose just a bit of faith in the universe.
I wonder if the Initiative will get their hands on one of the kids (since their only expecting one) or if the kids' powers'll manifest this quick or if cavalry will be required to save the day.
I can hardly wait for the next update.

Oh my god that was brilliant, I don't know how i'm gonna contain myself until the next chapter. I wish the doctor had got there quicker, wonder how Spikes going to overcome his handicap. So looking forward to more. Loved it.

Great update! It looks like everything is about to come to a boil.

Stupid Initiative....

Yay! Spike's doc is here!

Loved Wes teasing Giles. Love Dawn's typical teen reaction of being grossed out by the adult's affection.
The babies are a kick, too.

I hope their team can keep Riley's group far enough away so that Spike and Buffy don't have to fight at this time....they deserve some calm and rest and time with the babies.

Six weeks ago, I came across your "Origins" series.  I've been hooked ever since. Your work is truly amazing. I, for one, cannot wait to see what happens next. (But if this last chapter's any indicator..? it'll be great.)

Bravo.

LCF

wonderful read, as usual. thank you.

I thought this was a GREAT chapter!! So much is happening. Please don't make us wait too long to find out what happens next!

What can I say , it was perfect  and so tender and quiet.  Very moving.  And then you go and turn the thumscrews!  Heartpounding!

OH NO RILEY DONT DO IT damn he's crazyyyyy lol but anyways it was amazing all my expectations where met and i cant wait for more

nooooooooo there is no way you can leave it there lmao more now please????? great work.

Aaaaaahhhh, I'm dying here.  Please tell me you will have more soon!  I can hardly wait for all the confrontations.

oh man oh man oh man!!!!!!   Great chapter!!!!  I can't wait for more!

I can't imagine why Xander of all people needs to help with anything,,, but i am TRYING to wait and see....... trying!!!!!

Great Chapter!

At the risk of sounding like one of those really bad Buffy/Spike lemons (you know, the ones written by 13 year olds), all I can say is 'More! Faster!'

OH MY GOD, WHAT A PLACE TO LEAVE IT!!!  *flails hands*

Hurry and update soon, the suspense is killing me!!!  *makes grabby hands at you*