Like Mice in a Cornfield by denny
Chapter: Chapter II

Lisa
11/03/2008 04:09 am
It's an interesting story so far (although I've not read the comics so I'm a bit unsure of the setting). Without sounding like a grammar nazi, a "juggler" is someone like Penn Jillette. "Jugular" is the vein that runs along the side of the neck. When I read "juggler" it took me out of the story for a second.

All4Spike
10/31/2008 03:15 pm

Curiouser and curiouser...
By the way, the vein in the neck is not 'juggler', it's 'jugular'.