The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Fifteen

01/18/2009 09:15 pm
after all that has happen spike is still shocked.  fine read, thank you.

01/07/2009 04:04 am

buffy saying her name was just heartbreaking. 

12/08/2008 03:57 am
Yet again, another fabulous chapter ending with a major cliffy. I can't wait to find out what is on those walls!

12/07/2008 11:02 am
That's a damnable cliff hanger.  Have a little mercy.

12/06/2008 02:42 am

Ok, so I'm guessing paintings of some sort but of what?! First time in a long time I've gotten worked up wondering what comes next in a story, excellent job.

12/05/2008 08:12 pm
Well, I'm assuming that your title is about to come into play...
But you're sure an evil writer to leave a cliffhanger like THAT!!!

12/05/2008 06:04 pm
The reunion was written very well and I like how you write Spike's thoughts.  I can't imagine what horror Spike is seeing.  I patiently will await your update.  Great chapter. 

Kathy (
12/05/2008 04:12 pm
Okay, that's just a mean cliff hanger with the news that the updates are only going to be weekly.  If I didn't know better, I'd swear you were Joss writing under a pseudonym.

Sorry I don't review often, but you just lead me flabergasted and speechless when I read your work.


12/05/2008 03:16 pm
Ah! The suspense!! Update soon please!

12/05/2008 01:20 pm
great chapter!!!!!  Can't wait for MORE!!!

12/05/2008 12:58 pm
Slayer graffiti? Can't wait to see what has unsettled him so.  Great job on this fic - keeping Spike sane, understanding what will have happened to Buffy's mind through the centuries, depicting a hell that has hopelessness at its core.  So much going on.

12/05/2008 12:25 pm

A thousand years is unimagineable, and it's no wonder Buffy remembers nothing of her life, how could she ever?  She's starting anew, and thankfully she has Spike to help her.   It will be interesting to see how he copes with the challenge.  Wonderful chapter.

12/05/2008 12:24 pm
She's done a Fred, hasn't she? She's been writing... or possibly drawing... on the walls to try to remember everyone else... she's just forgotten herself. How unbearably sad, and how typical. Of course I could be wrong...

12/05/2008 09:23 am
What, what, what? Can't wait for more. Great update!!

12/05/2008 08:29 am
all I can say is WOW -

12/05/2008 06:45 am
What is it? What is it? What is the writing on the wall?!?!?! well, that's the question there, innit? GREAT chapter. I love Spike's thoughts and the way Hell exists for Buffy. The fact that the way he thought would bring them home is gone, how he (being our beloved Spike) is taking that, everything. Great ending to the chappie, even if I desperately want to know exactly what she wrote on the walls. Memories that haunt her and are the only remains of her previous life perhaps? Or even a marking of the days she spent in Hell maybe? I don't know, but I can't wait to find out!!!

12/05/2008 06:12 am
What?! Drawings? Stuff she tried to remind herself with? Nightmares?

So cute how child-like Buffy has him wrapped around her finger.

Pam S
12/05/2008 05:32 am
  Horrible to Spike must be bad... but for namesake.. Writing on the Wall..   Her life in hell spelled out maybe?  Despair.. loss of self?

   Waiting for the next update.. enjoying..