It Doesn’t End With a Wish by Sotia
Chapter: 1

12/22/2008 01:58 pm
You certainly like to write dangerously - giving Buffy the car keys???

the young Slayer she was thinking of breaking up  - okay that's a good start, but you owe it to your readers to Kill Kennedy.  ASAP.

Fun story, looking forward to more.
*giggles* I was sort of imagining the looks on Spike and William's faces when she said she'd drive... tehehehe

Kennedy will get what's coming to her, just not ASAP *hides*

Thank you for the review!
*hugs*

Cas
12/15/2008 08:56 pm
Went back and read the first one again - of course I remembered it pretty well too, cause it was way memorable.  Just love the "proper story" you've got going here.Just wondering who will be first to realise there maybe trouble in joyville.  Do the 2 Spikes know how they got to be there?  Or will it be one of the Scoobies to bring it up? 
Oh, I'm so glad you like it, I was so frustrated, thinking everybody hated this first chapter! Thank you so very much for the review, and I hope you like what comes next! And the Spikes know how they got there, but they don't know other things that will come up... dun dun dun dun!!! Thank you again,
*hugs*