The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Seventeen

01/18/2009 09:46 pm
beautiful read, thank you.

01/08/2009 01:03 am
God that was just beautiful, not smut.. not smut at all  :')

01/07/2009 01:46 pm
What a great chapter! Well worth the wait!

01/07/2009 11:31 am
I hope they get out soon! Great chapter, love Spike's "way".

01/06/2009 08:14 pm
..God, that was hot.


And I nearly cried as Buffy was saying her name over and over like that. That was all hot and sad at the same time.... huh.

01/04/2009 04:00 pm
I totally love Spike's inner monologue as he desperately tries to do the right thing. I suspect that the utter tenderness of physical contact with a loving Spike probably is the right thing at this point.
Can't wait to see how he manages to get them home, 'cos Spike's nothing if not persistent.

01/04/2009 11:01 am
I swear Holly, you write the most beautiful scenes ever! Like that, see that? That was amazing. The emotions were simply beautiful. I love your Spike, but I;m falling for your Buffy too. I almost started crying when Spike realized she was begging him. (But that might be because it's late at night and I'm tired and emotionally unstable =D) Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!

01/04/2009 01:39 am

wow - that was awesome.  Congrats on the much deserved awards.

01/03/2009 08:15 pm
I have no idea of what to say...the only thing that comes to mind is WOW! I really can't wait for more.

01/03/2009 06:41 pm

What an amazing chapter! So much tension and sweetness - oh my! As always, I look forward to more.

01/03/2009 05:17 pm
Wonderful insight into Spike's thoughts, absolutely brilliant.

01/03/2009 11:24 am
Oh, wow......rarely does a sexual scene bring tears. Poor Buffy, and Spike's conflict and heart breaking all over again for her.....perhaps Buffy can learn things all over again with sweet memories. With her past heartaches forgotten, learning about relating with another person can be a second chance for her. A crazy kind of blessing in disguise.

01/03/2009 10:56 am
This chapter was very tender.  Dont think I've read such a sweet and loving sex scene. 

But what's Larry going to say?  Do they kick you out of hell if you like it there?  

01/03/2009 04:13 am
I've been playing catch-up with this fic and am all caught up (for now, at least lol).

I'm really enjoying this intriguing tale. I can't wait to see how (or if) Buffy regains her memory, and how they find their way home. Looking forward to the next chap, and I'll try not to fall so far behind again.

Congratulations on the awards!