The Tin Bird by Spikez_tart
Chapter: A Few Words

07/11/2009 03:55 am
 OH thats terrible!  I didn't see that coming :(   Poor William
More meanness to come

Arielle
02/18/2009 12:32 am
so far i like it!
Thanks A - another chapter going up tonight.

01/05/2009 08:07 am
Oh wow that's terrible, I can't wait to continue this story, been a very good read so far.
Thanks guest.  What can I say?  I was born bad.

01/04/2009 10:13 pm
I don't think that William's mother would have approved Emma.
But what a fate - only coincidence that she is dead now that the tin bird is it?
No coincidences in fiction and its hard to imagine William's mother approving of anyone.  Thanks for reviewing.

01/04/2009 06:00 pm
amazing.
Thanks guest.

01/04/2009 04:34 pm
Definitely a horrifying and unexpected turn of events!
Yes, horrifying, thanks for the fine compliment. 

All4Spike
01/04/2009 02:58 pm
Oh, poor Emma... and poor William. I didn't see that coming...
I'm sure I gave some wicked hints.  Thanks for reviewing.

Cas
01/04/2009 05:05 am
Oh, poor William!  To have loved and lost so quickly!  But I am glad that he sees more clearly that Cecily would not do at all.
I'm not so certain that he sees so clearly about Cecily.  Thanks for reviewing.

01/04/2009 02:21 am

William and destiny - either way he turned; Cecily or Miss Harlan, death was following his path - the superficial and stifled life with Cecily or his brave attempt to life a full life with his lovely singer.  Either way, his innocence and romantic heart would have been destroyed.  William was truly a man lost in place and time but wanting to live and love -

Exactly - I can't believe that William hadn't been itching to kick over the traces prior to the night that Cecily sent him packing.  Thanks.

spuffy
01/04/2009 01:58 am
ho my god!!!
to that i didnt expect! poor william!!
plz update sooon!!

I had to kill her, I'm evil.  Thanks for reviewing.

01/04/2009 01:44 am
Oh dear...Angelus no doubt...THAT must have been what was dark and wet on his lips!  Poor William. 

Wonder how he will become entranced by Cecily once more having compared her so unfavorably to Emma.

Very tender how he "protected" his angel from prying eyes by pulling down her skirt and rearranged her head in a less painful looking position.  He is terribly sweet.

Kathleen
William is sweet.  Buffy doesn't deserve him.  Thanks for reviewing.