The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen

Liza
03/08/2009 08:25 pm
Can't access this !  Still !  Aargh!  Will I ever be able to?  Any backroads or short cuts that will help?

02/27/2009 12:23 am
Fantastic chapter. I adored the part when Buffy recognized Spike's vamp face and connected the river of blood to vampires. Very interesting that she knows thing witout knowing them, an aspect which you described most beautifully, I must say. Though I think my favorite portion was the fight and the feelings it brought out in both of them. The road is long, but they are definately headed in the right direction! Once again, loved the chapter!

sarai s.
02/19/2009 06:39 am
I am so glad to see an update. As usual, another wonderful chappy!

02/15/2009 10:40 pm
fine chapter, thank you. the writing is way more than "good."










02/13/2009 05:38 am

Excellent new chapter - loved your section on her writings on the wall and how she can make some connection with Spike in vamp face - bringing some tiny bit of spark to her long ago memories. 

Difficult to explore the theme of self identity or how our life experience combines with the mind to create our individual realities -

I will wait patiently for your next chapter - It Is Right that you should take your time with your work -

ElyseNotElsie
02/13/2009 02:38 am
I love this story

All4Spike
02/13/2009 12:51 am
Bit by bit she's coming back to herself. Something tells me it's going to be a long and painful journey and when she finally arrives she might not be pleased to have been forced to remember.

Bridget
02/12/2009 10:48 pm
Great chapter.  I really like how you write Spike's thoughts.  I thank you for the update and will patiently wait for the next one.  This is a great story and I would imagine it would take a lot out of you to write a chapter.

kim
02/12/2009 10:38 pm
Oooo, brilliant fun! Hell, yeah. But do we have the typical post-fight Slayer feeling? Hungry and horny? She has to be hungry, at least, skinny as she is here.

ya_lublyu_tebya
02/12/2009 08:53 pm
Nice move by Spike there - appealing to the dormant Slayer part of her. If only something would trigger her memory now... although the journey is being so brilliantly written. Take all the time you need if it comes out this good every time I'm sure we'll all be waiting whenever you need a break (I know the feeling!).