Relatively new to Fanfiction. Totally threw me for a loop with this plot. All I could say was "Huh?" thanks for that. Looking forward to reading.

And "Huh?" from me too.

have no idea where you are going with this, but if it is such fun as the opening chapter, i'm definitely going to enjoy the ride. thank you,luv.

Both those declarations threw me for a loop.  Looking forward to where you will take us with this.

interesting twists--Dawn, Parker, Spike's declaration of love!  I'm looking forward to how it all plays out.

Well, I think Buffy said the right words: "huh?"

Dawn her daughter( and PILLOCK Parker?!)... I hope that still there continues being a friendship between the nibblet and Spike. Yes, already I know that she is a baby but I think that she will like more Spike now.; DD

Nice chapter and waiting for the next.

Luck and nos leemos. ^^

and so say all of us. huh?

:D good chapter!