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Randy And Joanie Were Lovers by Shell Presto
Chapter: Outnumbered
calminthechaos
06/14/2009 03:57 am
Another amazing chapter! This one has been my favorite so far, although I did like them shopping and kissing (of course)! Please update soon. This is one of the few stories I check almost daily to see if there is more to it! Great stuff! I"m interested to see how you write Spike approaching the blood issue. And the daylight issue which I'm sure will both occur in the next chapter. Love it!!!
Thank ye kindly!
I certainly hope I can outdo every chapter. I won't lie, most updates will usually take 3 weeks. (If it seemed more frequent for a while, it was because I had a backlog of chapters while the site was down.) That's 1 to 2 weeks for me to write and 1 week for my beta to get around to reading it.
And I have to wonder if you're reading my mind, because I'm fairly sure I didn't foreshadow the daylight issue. But you're spot on, next chapter has it. And the blood issue, well, I'm having fun with that. You'll have to let me know how I'm doing, because it's gonna linger for a while.
I certainly hope I can outdo every chapter. I won't lie, most updates will usually take 3 weeks. (If it seemed more frequent for a while, it was because I had a backlog of chapters while the site was down.) That's 1 to 2 weeks for me to write and 1 week for my beta to get around to reading it.
And I have to wonder if you're reading my mind, because I'm fairly sure I didn't foreshadow the daylight issue. But you're spot on, next chapter has it. And the blood issue, well, I'm having fun with that. You'll have to let me know how I'm doing, because it's gonna linger for a while.
06/13/2009 05:37 pm
Loving the fact that although their minds can't remember, their bodies do when placed under stress.
You are the only person who commented on this -- as I'm fairly sure you're referring to Buffy remembering Spike's name -- and I would like to state that you've made me immeasurably happy for it. (Okay, that's a lie, I could measure it. But it's definitely happier than a Ben and Jerry's choco brownie splurge or new comic book day, so be proud!)
Really, truly, I'm just trying to play with a disconnect between memory and reaction. I liken it to how sometimes your hand can dial a number on a phone that you've called a lot even if your mind can't remember the numbers. At least, that's happened to me a lot.
Really, truly, I'm just trying to play with a disconnect between memory and reaction. I liken it to how sometimes your hand can dial a number on a phone that you've called a lot even if your mind can't remember the numbers. At least, that's happened to me a lot.
06/13/2009 01:42 pm
Cute.
ya_lublyu_tebya
06/13/2009 08:33 am
Aww, very nice. Lots more revelations to come I'm sure.
Of all the things I can assure you, lots more revelations comes high on the list.
06/13/2009 08:30 am
I love this premise and can't wait to read more!
06/13/2009 02:18 am
good chapter, greaqt characterization, the scene with Giles/Anya and the others in the Magic Box was well done.
Characterization is of utmost importance to me, so thanks. I'm also glad people are digging the multi-character scenes and not just focusing on spike and buffy. I'm always nervous people will get bored when I deal with the other characters. :(
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