Shattered silence by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter eighteen

10/04/2009 04:17 am
beautifully done, love. thank you for the fine read.
*smiles* I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you for taking your time to leave me yet another lovely review, vladt!!! :D

Goddess_Hecate
10/01/2009 06:33 am
I just found your story and read all the way up to this point non-stop.  I may fail my midterm I was supposed to be studying for, but this is SO worth it.  You're brilliant!
I love new reviewers! :D You've been a bit naughty I see... reading spuffy instead of studying! lol I gotta commend you though, to read it all in sitting takes one hell of a committed reader! *thumbs up* On the other hand, I'm sorry for distracting you... ehm, though not really that sorry, because then I wouldn't have this awesome review from you!!! :D I hope you'll ace the midterms so I won't have to feel guilty! :) Thank you for the heart warming, muse kicking compliment and your amazing review!!! :)

Deb
09/30/2009 09:11 pm
I really liked this chapter. Spike was hesitent and frustrated and caring without leaving character for ths very new situation, and Buffy's openness with her feelings and her seeking him out after their misunderstanding let the scene show a depth of love both are unfamiliar with before. The first kissing scene while they were talking in the training room was great, but the care infused into this last section was wonderful and not overstated. That last line left me feeling like I needed to read more, hopeful of how things would move on but still afraid if there will be another misunderstanding. Spike isn't going to think Buffy lied to him about her treatment, right? He must know they could have been hurting her over and over in other ways. And this is something she's willing to give him that hasn't been taken from her before.

Looking forward to the next chapter, and if the blood bond between them manifests some more! That bit of plot is too unique, and I can't wait to see where you decide to go with it!
I really loved your review, Deb! :D Poor Spike is struggling with his hold on control, his need to posses her fully, but knowing it's all Buffy's choice to make... we'll see more of that in the next chapter. And funny you should mention the blood link cause there's more about it in the following update, unless my betas recommend me to rewrite it, that is. :) I'm glad you find the idea unique, there's nothing you could say that would make me feel more accomplished and happy, so thank you! I agree that the second scene was more caring and meaningful, plus I'd like to think this Buffy is more mature than she would be at her age normally, so I made her face the conflict by approaching Spike instead of avoiding it. Don't worry about Spike's reaction... it'll work out! :)) Thank you for the amazing review, I really appreciate it!!! :D