Payback by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 3

Buffy Convert
10/31/2009 02:26 pm
Way to go, Spike! I love it that Tara, Willow, Dawn and Anya are all on Spike's side. It's about time that racist prick got his comeuppance!
I spent season 2-7 wanting to whack Xander.  :)  I'm so glad you agree with me about him!

10/30/2009 03:43 pm
Xander really really needed to be taken off his arrogant pedestal. Thanks for doing it in a very creative way!
I wanted everyone to realize that Spike never hurt them because he didn't want to, not because he couldn't.  He could have killed them or made their lives miserable and he didn't.  But Xander has really been asking for it and I couldn't resist.  :)

10/23/2009 03:52 am
love the chapter, thank you. can't believe buffy doesn't find thought provoking that only  she agrees with what xander wants? please let spike have a decade long contract that he can't change.
She wants to think the worst and won't hear anything different.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

10/21/2009 10:37 pm
“You can’t love without a soul!”

“Bollocks.
Angel can’t love without a soul. And we all know what a fine, upstanding bloke he is."

And there it is, the thing that Buffy doesn't want to face, but can't move on from until she does. It started her down the path of misdirection.

“Shoving me around when I can’t fight back, that’s low. But you’re the real expert on doing that, aren’t you, cutie?"

She'll have to change tactics, now, and really think about how she behaves. The smitten Spike might not have pushed her on this issue, but this one will.

Lots of interesting ideas in this chapter. I liked Tara standing up for the truth as she sees it. She really shows her spine in this season, and you've captured that even more explictly than usual. Good job.
Angel's responsible for so much that went wrong.  I really like Tara who saw things clearly and cared.  And, yeah, this Spike is going to push.  :D  Thank you for liking it!

Saggit
10/19/2009 11:21 pm
As a rule, I avoid WIP because they often end up remaining unfinished.  But since you have a habit of finishing stuff...in any case, very much enjoying this.  I like Unwhipped, Snarky Spike, and the way you get into it is nicely done.  It'll be interesting to see what else he gets up to, which his Whipped counterpart never did: the chip out, possibly?  And what would happen if he truly arranged for humans to die, such as the Nerds?  Good characterizations all around, and nice dialog.  Look forward to seeing the rest of it. :)
I never start posting until the story is complete and I just have to edit, just because I hate leaving people hanging with an unfinished story.  It drives me crazy myself not to find out how something ends.  I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!  Badass Spike is so much fun!

10/19/2009 06:39 pm
 I love this Spike !!! It was about time someone wrote it with a spine!!! not so broken and mama´s boy...    grins=)
Evil Spike is so much more fun, isn't he?  I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!

10/19/2009 08:22 am
i actually hope she dusts the bastard, i hate this spike with a passion.  even if xander may have had it coming, he's nothing but an ass.  i don't see how there's going to actually be any spuffy in this one, not if this spike doesn't have any feelings for her.  how can he just ignore all that future spike felt?  it makes me sad to realize that he doesn't even care for dawn.  i may give one more chapter a chance, but so far, i'm not liking where this is going.
He doesn't feel what future Spike felt.  Or so he keeps telling himself.  This is S3 Spike hitting out but conflicted, in the same way that Buffy is hitting out and conflicted.  And, if you think about it, Spike is being nowhere as harsh as Buffy was to him in canon during S6.  It really will end up Spuffy, but they both have things to work out.  If you've read my other stories, you'll know I'm a rabid Spuffy girl.  This one's just coming from a different angle.

Sharon
10/19/2009 05:15 am
Boy, Spike just loves playing with fire! But, I have the feeling that Buffy's the one who's going to get burned. Deservedly so.

I'm very much enjoying this story, and it's nice to see Spike get some of his own back.

Thank you for sharing it with us.
The man loves trouble. :D  I'm so glad you like it!  Thank you!

Niori
10/19/2009 12:43 am
*snicker* I love what you're doing to Xander. I personally would have voted for a beat down, but this is SO much better! This is long lasting, and harmless. But of course, leave it to Buffy to blow it out of perportion (even ANYA says it's no big deal, and she has to live in the apartment the Fiourd keep getting into). It's a prank really, nothing compared to what Spike could have done (again, my beatdown idea).
Oh, and go Tara! It's nice to see that someone is going to point out what a jerk Xander has been/.
And I must stress yet again, how much I love this Spike in this setting. I was watching season six last night (I had the urge to watched Once More With Feeling- as a musical theatre buff, tis my fav) and it just made me love it all the more. It made me laugh that you felt the need to put a not so PC warning, when this is NOWHERE near as bad as that season. Excpept apparently if a woman is the abusive one in the relationship, it's all good. If the writers had had Spike treat Buffy the way everyone would have been horrified. So seeing Spike give it back (not nearly as bad as she did the entire season, in my humble opinion) is refreshing. Makes me want to point and laugh. Seriously, after Wrecked all pity I felt for the girl after being torn out of heaven went away.
Anyway, there`s my I have issues with season six rant. One question; is this going to be another five chapter story. Just wondering, because I really can`t see it concluding in two chapters. Anyway, can`t wait until tomorrow!
Some people are already protesting, so it was a good thing that I put up that warning!  I'm with you.  If we had a man in Buffy's role and a woman in Spike's, season 6 would have been horrific.  Someone said we'd lynch such a man.  But a woman can't be abusive.  Yeah, right.  S6 is far worse than my story, but people are still having problems. 
I love musicals too and OMWF is one of my favorites.  :)  Oh, and there will be 7 chapters.

10/19/2009 12:34 am
*wiggles*

Spike always was the smartest of the Scoobies; he saw so much; that's what you get from 120 years of life.  It's a shame they never appreciated him more!

I love this, and I can't wait for more!
You're back!  I missed you.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  I too never could understand the Scoobs never utilized Spike's talents.

10/19/2009 12:29 am
I'm enjoying this Spike so much -- especially the lovely way he's getting back at Xander! -- that I would actually love it if he stayed just like this forever (sorry, not really a Spuffy fan here).  In fact, Buffy, Giles and Angel could *all* use some nice lovely Spike-payback...
I love evil Spike too. :D  That's why I can't resist coming back to him in a lot of stories.  I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!