The Fall of the Night by Mabel Marsters
Chapter: Chapter Two: Welcome Back

BuffyConvert
02/11/2010 12:04 pm
I've read some of your other stuff - which is why I decided to read this - but it's your first fanfic? What did you practise on-Nobel Prize winning novels? Really smooth writing, as well as being an exciting story!
Thank you sooooo much.  I did clean up the grammar a little when I posted here.  Speech tag punctuation was all wrong, but I didn't edit it otherwise as I wanted it to represent what I was like when I started.  Hopefully, I've improved a bit!

You made me blush and grin like a fool with your very kind comments.  :D