Great Story  - love how you used the Shanshu and brought in Helen as a new romantic relationship.  Nice to have a story where all the characters are getting along instead of some of the animosity between the male characters that is so often in stories.   Hope that you have that sequel.  I had frankly expected Drusilla to maybe be part of the Immortal's plans. 

 very enjoyable read, thank you.

great story but you have me worried for a while with the helen spike story!!!!!!!!!keep writing post chosen stories!!!!!!!!and make buffy overwelmed with guilt and grief cause she always gets a way to easily even in fics!!!!!!!!by the way i loved your universal vampire !in deed one of the best stories about initiative!!!!!!!!greadings from greece!!!!