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Stolen Innocence by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter three
07/22/2010 02:33 am
Evil writer. Not believing Faith in physics class though - maybe remedial arithmetic. :)
You know, I get that 'evil' thing a lot. I wonder why. lol Haha... you can be sure Faith didn't pay any attention to the class whatsoever. Now that is very believable, right? Thank you for the yummy review!!! :)
scarlett2u
06/20/2010 04:44 am
Okay, so I'm hooked on your story, but the smooch tease thing? That was mean. Just sayin'. Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be looking for smoochies in chapter 4.
I'm happy to know that! And I just had to tease you like that.... sometimes the anticipation of the kiss is better than the kiss itself. Also, I like being evil. ;) Believe me, there are chapters that have a much meaner ending. Hope you'll like the smoochies! Thank you for the funny review!!! :D
txjmfan
03/29/2010 03:31 am
LOL! Liking this story very much already. Great writing. Dead on William characterization.
Hee... now you're making me feel all mushy. :D With me, compliments will get anything. I'm glad you like my William, he's just so sweet. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :)
Deb
03/28/2010 04:45 am
Well, the build-up to the almost-kiss was beautiful, and I'm sure neither of them will forget the moment! It's interesting to see Faith's philosophy about how you can only rely on yourself and her attitude while she's still able to open up to Buffy and even warn her about some of the possible dangers of the school. I love how you're building the hints of the supernatural, and can't wait to see that 'bestial power' you mentioned in the very beginning and how it affects or will be affected by the feelings William already has for Buffy.
Powerful, but added to the supernatural, dangerous too. My kind of fun! ;)
Great chapter, thanks for updating!
Powerful, but added to the supernatural, dangerous too. My kind of fun! ;)
Great chapter, thanks for updating!
It was a tease, I admit, but I'm happy to know you found it beautiful. :D It is just another bit to nudge them closer together. It was all about the moment, the anticipation, not the actual execution. ;) I always thought Faith was a kind of person that fought her fight and only relying on herself instead of letting the others do it for her. Her and Buffy were like sisters on the show before the whole her going bad thing, and here I'm trying to make them roommates/reluctant friends. ;) Hee... there definitely will be supernatural things going on, and both William and Buffy will end up in a different place than the one they started at. They're going to have to find the way towards each other again though it would be more difficult.
Hee... I',m not that big of a fan of AH so I had to spice it up a bit. ;) If you're having fun, so am I! :D
Thank you for the awesome review, Deb!!! :D
Hee... I',m not that big of a fan of AH so I had to spice it up a bit. ;) If you're having fun, so am I! :D
Thank you for the awesome review, Deb!!! :D
03/27/2010 04:59 pm
Don't normally read AH fic but this looks very interesting !
I wonder what trouble Faith will get into and what secrets the headmistress has..?
I wonder what trouble Faith will get into and what secrets the headmistress has..?
Hee... it just starts out as AH, but it's actually not as the story goes on. There will be Spike eventually, we just have to get there. ;)
Faith will cause quite a stir for Buffy, but she's not a bad guy in this one. More like naughty annoying friend and roommate. Headmistress defintely has a secret agenda. Thank you for the delicious review, Sintares!!! :D
Faith will cause quite a stir for Buffy, but she's not a bad guy in this one. More like naughty annoying friend and roommate. Headmistress defintely has a secret agenda. Thank you for the delicious review, Sintares!!! :D
Abby
03/26/2010 08:47 pm
I like where you're taking this! It's very interesting and Buffy and Spike are so sweet! I'm interested in seeing what happens next!
You're sweet and lovely. :) I'm very glad you're liking it so far. There are some twists in the following chapters so I hope you'll like. ;) Hee... aren't they just the cutest? I love writing them like that. Thank you for the awesome review, Abby!!! :D
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