Stolen Innocence by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter nine

07/24/2010 12:09 am
Great chapter - interesting twist that Buffy is confined to the school by her own mother (and evil Ted) and also that both Darla and Dru make William into a vampire.  Good fight scene.
Glad you liked the twist! I thought it would be interesting to have Buffy own the power (even if she's not yet aware of all she's capable of) and unable to use it to save William. I was afraid the whole barrier around the school due to the contracts would be confusing, but hey... I can always elaborate if someone doesn't get it. Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it!!! :)