The Better To Bite You With by Joyful Dayz
Chapter: Chapter 5 - If You Loved Her

05/28/2010 11:17 pm
Hmm, I don't really like Spike feigning innocence like he didn't know what he was doing when in the first couple of chapters its very clear by his thoughts he had this planned from the get go. Seems kinda skeevy to me, lol.
Spike always plays his cards close to his chest.  He told Giles what he felt the watcher needed to know. not what precipitated the mating.  Spike knew ahead of time that Buffy would be his, to his mind, his mate.  He didn't know ahead of time that they would be formally "Mated".  Get the difference?  Perhaps I could make the distinction more definate in the story.  Thanks so much for your comments.  :)

spiked1
05/28/2010 05:20 am
So, Giles is being semi reasonable.  Good to see.  Looking forward to more.
Thank you!   More is up.

05/28/2010 03:20 am
 one thing led to another   :)  LOL

Good twist bringing the CoW into the mix. 
Thank you!  Yes, it was rather an understatement.

05/27/2010 03:50 pm
So, Giles didn't try to kill Spike after all.  Huh, is he actually going to be reasonable?  Hope so.

Sort of, thanks for commenting.