Holiday on Helarth by dawnofme
Chapter: 3. Not the Hilton

06/20/2010 10:20 pm
Thank you for more of a descriptive reference for this dimension.  I suppose they had to get there before they could even consider a means of returning.
:)  I have been struggling with the world building in this story, but I am not a sci-fi or fantasy writing by any means.  If I get the balance of description and plot wrong, please have mercy.  LOL! 

And thanks for reading the story. 

Pam S
06/10/2010 02:54 am
enjoyed..  waiting to learn more about Helarth..
Thank you.  I'm thrilled that you are reading the story.