Fin Amour by Angearia
Chapter: Chapter Five

Brunettepet
07/28/2010 01:42 am
 Wow.  This chapter is terrific.   Buffy going into labor was an inconvenience that couldn't be more ill timed.  It must have been agonizing going through that all alone. 

The urgency and need to protect Buffy was beautifully realized and the brutal fight was vivid and awful.  It's terrible that it may all have been for nothing.

07/24/2010 08:57 pm
To do anything other than ride with labor invites misery.  Great description.  And poor Spike..all that effort and it wasn't enough.  Sad. 



Thanks, I'm glad it worked well.  It is tragic for Spike, but maybe it's more that he thinks it wasn't enough.

kim
07/06/2010 06:50 am
Spike!
Poor Spike. :(

07/05/2010 11:58 pm
Oh no - you didn't kill Spike?  Great fight scene and LoL at SPike telling Buffy to put the water back.
Haha, thanks.  And yes, poor Spike. :(