Hidden Agendas by angelic_amy
Chapter: Déjà Vu.

JenxGeR
01/16/2006 09:56 pm
Nice fight scenes. No long descriptions of right hook, uppercut, blah blah. Just great general actions that brought the scenes forward that kept me reading.
Thanks! I wanted the fight scenes to be fast moving, and too much description can sometimes slow them down. I'm glad you liked how they were written!