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Could Be You by Abby
Chapter: Chapter Ten
06/07/2011 06:01 pm
Really loved this chapter. You do a fabulous job getting into their heads and showing how they really "get" each other.
"He pulled her coat off the counter and handed it to her, then opened the door without a word and followed her into the night." ---See, that is just so them.
Brava!
Thank you -- I do like knowing what works, so the feedback about getting into their heads is very nice to hear. Also, I like to hear what specific things people like, like the jacket thing there. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Jags
10/08/2010 09:08 pm
As always you're doing great! Keep it up!
Thank you!
10/08/2010 06:24 am
Great update. More please.
You got it.
Amaya
09/24/2010 05:10 pm
Please try to update sooner. I like this story very much and I want to read more.
Glad you're liking it. Thank you :)
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