Help Yourself in Seven Days by Sotia
Chapter: Day One — Delegate

12/05/2010 07:19 pm
Buffy hard exterior needs to be melted for her own good...but she doesn't see it yet.  I like the way you are slowly opening her eyes to the problem she has.
I think Buffy is this hard because she has spent too much time with people depending on her. She's afraid to soften up and relinquish control, but Spike is getting to her because he knows how to take care of people. I'm glad you like the pacing of this story. Thank you!

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spikez_tart
11/26/2010 10:15 pm
Poor Buffy, getting smacked back.  :)
Heh, I know. How dare Spike do that?

Thanks for reading!
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11/22/2010 12:48 am
I like how obvious it is that Spike truly does love Buffy.  He doesn't just want her for sex.  Hopefully this "tough love"  experiment will do her some good.
Keep fingers crossed ;-) And yes, he does love her. Sigh. Too bad he didn't go the "tough love" route in the show...

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Sue
11/20/2010 08:24 pm
Oh, Buffy... how lucky you are..

Enjoyed- love the selection of reading material.. guess we will see if she makes that transformation.
I like how some of the readers assume the choice of stories are about Buffy and others that they're about Spike. I guess that means both of them need some transformation, huh? ;-)

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you!

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Melissa
11/20/2010 04:52 pm
Wow, I really like this.  Your writing is really lovely, too--particularly her waking up terrified, it just broke my heart all over again.  I'm excited to see where you take this!
Thank you so very much:) You can't imagine how happy it makes me that you like the story and my writing!

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