Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Part 7

11/23/2006 03:18 am
maybe there's hope for xander yet :) but i have a feeling now things are going to get very ugly with angelus, aren't they? :(

11/23/2006 02:45 am
30 -- i hope wes is okay at the hospital...and i hope angelus and dru dont hurt spike or buffy...and buffy's pregnant, isn't she? :) great chapter :)

11/23/2006 02:35 am
29 -- oh poor cordy...you captured her reaction very well, very realistic, heart-breakingly so...now i just hope spike will be okay... :( great chapter :)

11/23/2006 01:43 am
28 -- oh no...i have a bad feeling about this plan...hope spike's okay..poor cordy, hope they can save her soon...excellent chapter, looking forward to more :)

08/18/2006 11:44 pm
ch 31

can't wait to see who showed up - great story - i truly love this fic go team spuffy with the rescues!

08/18/2006 11:37 pm
ch 30 - thank goodness they rescued cordy - i am glad wes is staying there with her. great writing - very emotional scenes

08/18/2006 11:29 pm
Ch 29 - great chappie - i feel so sorry for cordy you write the scene perfectly. such pain and emotion = great job!!!

08/18/2006 11:14 pm
Chapter 28 = wow powerful chapter = i feel so sorry for cordy = i hope everythings turns out ok and they can rescue her. just wow great chapter

Verda
07/01/2006 10:37 am
That was so raw and powerful and sweet and tender, you put just about every emotion available between those chapters. At least Xander's helping, better than just running his mouth. Oh! what happened to the girl that they rescued besides Cordy? Your poem was beautiful, dark, but beautiful. Thanking you ever so, for writing it.