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Running from the Inevitable by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter four
04/02/2011 12:39 am
hee these two are a couple of idiots. LOL
LMAO!! Yup, it will be sheer luck if they don't up killing each other. :D
annie
01/14/2011 02:55 am
And Again with the twists and turns. Didn't expect the Amazon women to find them so quickly. And all I picture when I read the word Amazon is a blonde, larger Xena. Huh. Weird.
Love the interaction between them now. *Love*. Flustered Buffy and Unashamed Spike is a match-made-in-heaven! The banter, the wit, the humor.
(imagine me sing-song-ing this in a high falsetto, kay?)
-Loooooviiiing iiit!
And Buffy straddling Spike again? Methinks the lady doth protests too much and is really a lust-bunny-for-Spike. :D
And oh Spike. Spike, Spike, Spike, Spike, Spike. WE all know why you can't stay away from ole SunnyD. Why can't you see it? Or, weeell, why can't you stop with the repression and denial?
Those two kids. They sure got some issues. Lucky they have such a good parent (read; writer) that will look after them and guide them on their way to adulthood.
To be continued...
(psst! on the next chapter-page!)
Love the interaction between them now. *Love*. Flustered Buffy and Unashamed Spike is a match-made-in-heaven! The banter, the wit, the humor.
(imagine me sing-song-ing this in a high falsetto, kay?)
-Loooooviiiing iiit!
And Buffy straddling Spike again? Methinks the lady doth protests too much and is really a lust-bunny-for-Spike. :D
And oh Spike. Spike, Spike, Spike, Spike, Spike. WE all know why you can't stay away from ole SunnyD. Why can't you see it? Or, weeell, why can't you stop with the repression and denial?
Those two kids. They sure got some issues. Lucky they have such a good parent (read; writer) that will look after them and guide them on their way to adulthood.
To be continued...
(psst! on the next chapter-page!)
LOL! Yu're kinda close with your visual. ;) I imagine them like models that are gorgeous, skinny and really tall... only with deadly weapons and hunting skills worth of a hound. They can track very well, especially men who offended their pride.
*sings along with you* What?! It's catchy. :D They are quite a pair, and Spike just loves taunting Buffy when she's all flustered. I'm so happy you love it!!! And I don't know why but when you wrote you're 'looooviiing iit', I thought of McDonalds. LOL
Oh yeah. ;) She's just drawn to his groin like a fly to the honey. She can't resisit the temptation!
Silly, silly vampire. We all know why he keeps coming back. Someone should thump him upside the head... maybe that would help.
Hahaha... indeed I feel like their parent sometimes. Gotta do some matchmaking with those two crazy kids. ;)
Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D
*sings along with you* What?! It's catchy. :D They are quite a pair, and Spike just loves taunting Buffy when she's all flustered. I'm so happy you love it!!! And I don't know why but when you wrote you're 'looooviiing iit', I thought of McDonalds. LOL
Oh yeah. ;) She's just drawn to his groin like a fly to the honey. She can't resisit the temptation!
Silly, silly vampire. We all know why he keeps coming back. Someone should thump him upside the head... maybe that would help.
Hahaha... indeed I feel like their parent sometimes. Gotta do some matchmaking with those two crazy kids. ;)
Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D
01/13/2011 02:24 am
Terrific dialogue! Fast paced and witty!
You're making me blush! Your lovely review just made me very happy!!! :D
Lilashannah
01/11/2011 06:39 pm
LOving it so far and can't wait for more.
So happy to hear it! :) And good news, you won't have to wait at all since I've just updated another chapter. Thank you for the very lovely review!!! :D
Emma
01/10/2011 10:11 pm
Pleeeaaaseeee give me more!! :)
There shall be more tomorrow, gorgeous. ;) See? I won't let you hang for long. Thank you for the delightful review!!! :D
01/09/2011 01:24 pm
Wow.Wow.Wow.
More.More.More.
Did i mention wow?
Aaaaaaand btw im now hell disappointed cos i was reading your other stories in between chapters of this one and now ive finished them all so i have to find some other good stories hahaha :)
xo
More.More.More.
Did i mention wow?
Aaaaaaand btw im now hell disappointed cos i was reading your other stories in between chapters of this one and now ive finished them all so i have to find some other good stories hahaha :)
xo
I didn't just get a 'wow' I got three of them!! *does her embarassing dance of joy*
Yes, kind lady. ;)
Hee... makes me so happy!!
And this just made my day. Btw, that's saying a lot since my bro bought a gorgeous top for me today. Consider yourself officially awesome. ;) So happy you liked my other stories as well! Wooo! Thank you for the delightful review!!! :D
xo
Yes, kind lady. ;)
Hee... makes me so happy!!
And this just made my day. Btw, that's saying a lot since my bro bought a gorgeous top for me today. Consider yourself officially awesome. ;) So happy you liked my other stories as well! Wooo! Thank you for the delightful review!!! :D
xo
01/09/2011 01:55 am
Poor Buffy in her bad underwear.
LOL! This cracked me up. Ah, the Disney knickers. Honestly, what was she thinking? Thank you for the funny review!!! ;)
Sarah
01/08/2011 10:36 am
Wonderful chapter!! The UST just keeps getting higher and Spike and Buffy's relationship is getting closer but you're keeping them so much in character it's brilliant!!!
I adored Spike's reaction to Buffy's threat of taking his car! Typical male! In fact he sounded so much like my brother it's scary!! And then their little tossle on the ground..... I think Spike must have a new appreciation for the looseness of towels! And Buffy wearing Disney knickers with a black bra? Priceless!! No wonder Spike was amused!
Also, Spike putting the keys in his front pocket was a great example of his judgement of Buffy's personality. At this point there would be no way Buffy would put her hands anywhere near that part of his anatomy to get those keys!!
Buffy's reaction to Spike's "seen much more beautiful women in my time" was very true to both Buffy's character and to that of any woman caught in such a state of undress, regardless of how pretty they are, in front of someone they may loath but still find quite attractive.
Loved Spike's thought-process immediately after just insulting Buffy's appearance, especially his "damn, now she's putting the towel back on." I can just see him pouting too!! Poor Spike!!
I almost died laughing at the opening scene for the next part! Phones being thrown at his head and Spike just admires the look of the thrower!! Plus, Buffy wearing his red shirt - oh yeah, I bet Spike is really enjoying seeing that!! The interaction between Buffy and Spike was extremely well-written and I loved the fast-paced dialogue between them! Insults, innuendoes and, of course, secrets slipping out - simply magnificent! Buffy's reaction was everything Spike would've been dreading!!
The car-stealing scene was exceptionally entertaining, especially Spike's "and here I thought you'd be bitching that I stole it" comment and poor Buffy getting all flustered over the thought of Spike's "impressive" piece of equipment.
The following scene with Buffy hitting Spike whilst he's driving and his getting distracted by her lengthy legs was a perfect example of why those two should not sit next to each other in a car (well, while one of them is driving anyway!!) And Buffy grabbing the wheel was the icing on the cake!! I adored Spike's concern when Buffy was injured, whilst of course insulting her intelligence (he wouldn't be Spike if he didn't!) and can I just ask, was Buffy going to say "heaven" upon thinking she saw two Spikes? I know I would be!")
I simply love how you wrote the last few paragraphs. Despite his ticked off mood and general reluctance to seem anything but the "Big Bad" I can just see him actually being quite gentle when picking Buffy up and going out of his way to get her help when she's injured. I especially liked his usage of "sweetheart" and his last thought "why can't I stay away?". I think we all know the answer to that one, but sometimes Spike just needs that little extra push when it comes to knowing his own heart.
Overall, thanks for such a marvellous chapter & I looked forward to discovering how Spike fares with getting Buffy the medical attention she needs, and how long he can resist admitting that he might just actually care about the "barmy woman" in his arms who also happens to be wearing his favourite red shirt! :)
I adored Spike's reaction to Buffy's threat of taking his car! Typical male! In fact he sounded so much like my brother it's scary!! And then their little tossle on the ground..... I think Spike must have a new appreciation for the looseness of towels! And Buffy wearing Disney knickers with a black bra? Priceless!! No wonder Spike was amused!
Also, Spike putting the keys in his front pocket was a great example of his judgement of Buffy's personality. At this point there would be no way Buffy would put her hands anywhere near that part of his anatomy to get those keys!!
Buffy's reaction to Spike's "seen much more beautiful women in my time" was very true to both Buffy's character and to that of any woman caught in such a state of undress, regardless of how pretty they are, in front of someone they may loath but still find quite attractive.
Loved Spike's thought-process immediately after just insulting Buffy's appearance, especially his "damn, now she's putting the towel back on." I can just see him pouting too!! Poor Spike!!
I almost died laughing at the opening scene for the next part! Phones being thrown at his head and Spike just admires the look of the thrower!! Plus, Buffy wearing his red shirt - oh yeah, I bet Spike is really enjoying seeing that!! The interaction between Buffy and Spike was extremely well-written and I loved the fast-paced dialogue between them! Insults, innuendoes and, of course, secrets slipping out - simply magnificent! Buffy's reaction was everything Spike would've been dreading!!
The car-stealing scene was exceptionally entertaining, especially Spike's "and here I thought you'd be bitching that I stole it" comment and poor Buffy getting all flustered over the thought of Spike's "impressive" piece of equipment.
The following scene with Buffy hitting Spike whilst he's driving and his getting distracted by her lengthy legs was a perfect example of why those two should not sit next to each other in a car (well, while one of them is driving anyway!!) And Buffy grabbing the wheel was the icing on the cake!! I adored Spike's concern when Buffy was injured, whilst of course insulting her intelligence (he wouldn't be Spike if he didn't!) and can I just ask, was Buffy going to say "heaven" upon thinking she saw two Spikes? I know I would be!")
I simply love how you wrote the last few paragraphs. Despite his ticked off mood and general reluctance to seem anything but the "Big Bad" I can just see him actually being quite gentle when picking Buffy up and going out of his way to get her help when she's injured. I especially liked his usage of "sweetheart" and his last thought "why can't I stay away?". I think we all know the answer to that one, but sometimes Spike just needs that little extra push when it comes to knowing his own heart.
Overall, thanks for such a marvellous chapter & I looked forward to discovering how Spike fares with getting Buffy the medical attention she needs, and how long he can resist admitting that he might just actually care about the "barmy woman" in his arms who also happens to be wearing his favourite red shirt! :)
Wooo... such a long review!! :O Makes me very excited!
Thank you so much for all the incredibly lovely compliments! :) The UST ensues in the following chapters as well, so you should like it. And it's awesome to hear Buffy and PSike are in character... there's nothign worse than them acting way too OCC when it's not even AU story. I'd have to be devastated if I did that.
Hee... so your borther is one fo those men too, huh? LOL I don't know what is it with men and their cars... so weird. It probably has something do with all the testosteron or something. Then again, personally, I act the same way about my clothes. I'm very possessive about them. And just like Buffy, I'd be embarassed as hell to get caught in such a choice of underwear... ah, the laundry days. ;)
What woman wouldn't be hurt by such a comment. Especially by someone she's reluctantly attracted to. It's not pleasant. And Buffye had no way of knowing Spike was just covering. No way she'd dig around his front pocket for those keys. Not yet anyway. ;)
With Buffy and Spike residing with the same room, poor furniture gets the brunt of their frustration. But you know Spike... violence makes him hot. Especially when the attacker is wearing his shirt that doesn't cover all that much. ;) Hearing you say the interaction was well-written makes me insanely happy!! It's better than being fed chocolate. And I really LOVE chocolate.
Spike and Buffy are an interesting pair of criminals, aren't they? :D Stealing some poor person's car, and all Buffy does is complain it's not faster. And gets flustered about Spike's 'package'. I dare say it's rather true to call it impressive. I mean, have you noticed the bulge in Spike's trousers? *faints* Oh dear. I'm such a perv, but the best place to see it is in 'Hush' when he's tied to Xander's chair in the basement and shows him the two finger salute.
Hee... Spike and Buffy in the same car? Not the best idea ever. Because we all know violence and driving do not mix very well. Spike rose to the occassion though and against his better judgement felt concerned about her. hence the gentle sweeping her up and checking if she's fine. *swoons* I love concerned Spike.
Yup, you said it perfectly... he just needs a push.
It will be quite ahoot when they get to the hospital... Buffy might be under the influence of hospital drugs. That's all I'm saying. ;) Thank you for the brilliant review!!! You're made of win. :D
Thank you so much for all the incredibly lovely compliments! :) The UST ensues in the following chapters as well, so you should like it. And it's awesome to hear Buffy and PSike are in character... there's nothign worse than them acting way too OCC when it's not even AU story. I'd have to be devastated if I did that.
Hee... so your borther is one fo those men too, huh? LOL I don't know what is it with men and their cars... so weird. It probably has something do with all the testosteron or something. Then again, personally, I act the same way about my clothes. I'm very possessive about them. And just like Buffy, I'd be embarassed as hell to get caught in such a choice of underwear... ah, the laundry days. ;)
What woman wouldn't be hurt by such a comment. Especially by someone she's reluctantly attracted to. It's not pleasant. And Buffye had no way of knowing Spike was just covering. No way she'd dig around his front pocket for those keys. Not yet anyway. ;)
With Buffy and Spike residing with the same room, poor furniture gets the brunt of their frustration. But you know Spike... violence makes him hot. Especially when the attacker is wearing his shirt that doesn't cover all that much. ;) Hearing you say the interaction was well-written makes me insanely happy!! It's better than being fed chocolate. And I really LOVE chocolate.
Spike and Buffy are an interesting pair of criminals, aren't they? :D Stealing some poor person's car, and all Buffy does is complain it's not faster. And gets flustered about Spike's 'package'. I dare say it's rather true to call it impressive. I mean, have you noticed the bulge in Spike's trousers? *faints* Oh dear. I'm such a perv, but the best place to see it is in 'Hush' when he's tied to Xander's chair in the basement and shows him the two finger salute.
Hee... Spike and Buffy in the same car? Not the best idea ever. Because we all know violence and driving do not mix very well. Spike rose to the occassion though and against his better judgement felt concerned about her. hence the gentle sweeping her up and checking if she's fine. *swoons* I love concerned Spike.
Yup, you said it perfectly... he just needs a push.
It will be quite ahoot when they get to the hospital... Buffy might be under the influence of hospital drugs. That's all I'm saying. ;) Thank you for the brilliant review!!! You're made of win. :D
01/07/2011 04:44 pm
Spike likes cats? I am even more endeared to him--wait, is that possible?
Winner of this round: tough call. It's gonna have to be by points:
Half-nekkid wrestling: draw
Insults B's undies: advantage Spike
Likes B's bra: advantage Buffy
Has a distracting chest: S
Has real boobs: B
Spike pouts: S
B steals S's shirt: B
And looks good in it: B
B says S's butt is "scrawy" (really, EoR, how can you write such fiction? It's the fictioniest fiction ever!): B
B calls S "a pervert" and "a male": S (Lame-o insults there, Buff)
S reveals his Amazon booty guilt: B
S should have stolen a faster car: B (reminiscent of Leia in Empire here)
B "offends his manhood": B
B blushes: S
B confesses she likes hitting him (so sweet): S
S throws over shoulder and departs for the hospital: S
Okay, that's 8 for Spike (counting the draw) and 9 (also counting the draw) for Buffy. Is this too close to call? I'll let the author be the judge.
One last question: Did you mean it to be Disney "motif"? 'Cause I couldn't quite picture Walt having motives about Buffy's undies. But hey, maybe he's a pervert too; we know he's a male.
And should you get bored over the weekend, another chapter would not be minded at all by us, your adoring throng of fans. Banter makes me happy. Your dialogue? Great stuff! Write on, EoR!
Of course he does! Once he gets to live 500, he'll buy a small cottage and surround himself with tens of cats that will keep him company.
LOL! This just cracked me up so much... LOVE how you keep track of their arguments and battles of will. *g*
Agree on the wrestling though it could be slightly tipped in Buffy's favour since she ended on top. ;)
Yup, yup and yup. All very valid points... I'm impressed!
Not only Buffy's got real boobs... she got Spike to want to lick them. I say we concede that as another point in her favour. ;)
Oooh, Buffy does say Spike's butt is scrawny, BUT we all know she's just covering and internally wishes to indeed pinch and squeeze those two buns of steel.
Hence the lame insults to quickly turn the attention away from Spike's irresistibly arse. Her brain doesn't work too fast, unfortunately. ;)
Hee... I thought Buffy liking to hit Spike was sweet too. Maybe we're twins separated at birth! *gasp*
I'm judging this round to be Buffy's... after al, as stated previously by your lordship, B has a lot on her plate but she rose to the challenge and came out victorious. ;)
OMG! Yes! Thank yuo for the typo alert, I've already fixed the hell out of it. And your subsequent comment made me laugh. You bet your ass Disney was a pervert.
I do love to make you happy! And if you write the essay I'm supposed to hand in next week, after I spend 9 hours travelling, I'll do so happily. ;) But if everything goes according to me plans, I'll update more on Tuesday. *ducks blunt heavy objects thrown at her* It'll fly by! :D The time, I mean. Thank you for the brilliant review!!! :D
LOL! This just cracked me up so much... LOVE how you keep track of their arguments and battles of will. *g*
Agree on the wrestling though it could be slightly tipped in Buffy's favour since she ended on top. ;)
Yup, yup and yup. All very valid points... I'm impressed!
Not only Buffy's got real boobs... she got Spike to want to lick them. I say we concede that as another point in her favour. ;)
Oooh, Buffy does say Spike's butt is scrawny, BUT we all know she's just covering and internally wishes to indeed pinch and squeeze those two buns of steel.
Hence the lame insults to quickly turn the attention away from Spike's irresistibly arse. Her brain doesn't work too fast, unfortunately. ;)
Hee... I thought Buffy liking to hit Spike was sweet too. Maybe we're twins separated at birth! *gasp*
I'm judging this round to be Buffy's... after al, as stated previously by your lordship, B has a lot on her plate but she rose to the challenge and came out victorious. ;)
OMG! Yes! Thank yuo for the typo alert, I've already fixed the hell out of it. And your subsequent comment made me laugh. You bet your ass Disney was a pervert.
I do love to make you happy! And if you write the essay I'm supposed to hand in next week, after I spend 9 hours travelling, I'll do so happily. ;) But if everything goes according to me plans, I'll update more on Tuesday. *ducks blunt heavy objects thrown at her* It'll fly by! :D The time, I mean. Thank you for the brilliant review!!! :D
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