The Ghost in You by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: Chapter 2

behind blue eyes
10/04/2011 07:04 pm

You did a wonderful job capturing Buffy's feelings of being trapped and the Scoobies perception of Spike-only as extra musle

I can't imagine being in Buffy's shoes. Even when she was messed up she was a do-er, and here she can only watch. 

08/06/2011 07:39 pm
Those with eyes but cannot see, those with ears but cannot hear.  The symbolism of them being so blind and deaf isn't all that subtle, but I don't think that's what you were aiming for anyway.  Lovely bonding between Spike and Buffy.
I never thought of the whole blind and deaf metaphor. I shall have to read my own work again and ponder that...

04/05/2011 12:47 am

oh man - Spike just promised to send her back!  Can't believe it.  Good twist.

I never saw Spike as one to go along with the resurrection deal.

04/05/2011 12:47 am

oh man - Spike just promised to send her back!  Can't believe it.  Good twist.

mazza
03/31/2011 10:22 pm

great chapter - the Scoobies not listening to Spike was spot on; will Spike talk to Dawn or Tara about Buffy's ghost or will he find out that they tried to bring Buffy back? I love it when you keep me guessing about where the plot wil go. Style and standard of writing as excellent as ever.

Thanks again Mazza! I'll try not to keep you in suspense too long.