The Ghost in You by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: Chapter 4

behind blue eyes
10/04/2011 07:24 pm

Interesting twist bringing in "The First."

I figured the Scoobies might remember that...

08/06/2011 09:03 pm
It's a little touching, Buffy self-involvement.  Touching and grating.  When she believes she's at fault for something it can be grating.  When she thinks bad things happen because of her, it's almost sad, in a way. Poor girl doesn't really get a break.  On the other hand, Willow is an idiot.  She's by far the stupidest smart person I've ever seen.  And maybe if she'd get her head out of her ass for a minute or two and stop trying to cut corners, her spells might actually have the effect they were indended to.  But no, she's too busy interposing her own will and insecurities for that to happen.  What a twit.
Buffy does kick herself a lot. Of course, doesn't help that her well meaning friends kick her too. 

05/07/2011 01:45 am
This is a very clever conflict but again....poor Spike!
Spike does usually have to go through the wringer in my stories. But that which does not kill him...

04/05/2011 01:04 am

Oh boy - Willow is going to do something really stupid isn't she? 

Hmmm... possibly.... :-)

04/03/2011 11:39 pm

oh dear lord, they really don't have a clue. I like the way that Buffy is learning all the things that are going on and how Spike is being treated even though he is helping and all. Good chapters, like the way Willow nearly went all dark eyed and that she has now thrown the First into the picture while denying it might have been the spell - but will Buffy find out about the spell?

All I can say now is that our local neighborhood slayer is NOT going to be happy when she finds out her friends did all this to her...