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Destroying Entropy by BuffyMeetsSpike 08/26/2011 02:44 am I really hope Hallie comes through and decides to let Spike have a go at Xander. He deserves to be beat. Repeatedly. Willow also needs to get a slap. I still feel for Buffy -- you've pretty accurately described how an assault victim responds -- the need for comfort, the severe washing, the denial. . . but don't you think our poor girl has had enough? I promise, Buffy will come out alright in the end. But for whatever reason, I seem to have a need to beat on her a lot. I really shouldn't write when I have PMS.... magnus374 07/07/2011 04:39 pm Good job with the characters thoughts. Xander is very well done, how he tries to think himself out of guilt. Halli could be a way for Spike to get the chip out. He shouldn't kill Xander though, that would be wrong and in the end just make things harder for Spike and Buffy. Yeah, I don't see any way to actually kill Xander and have it work. I should put that out as a challenge for someone else... Thanks for the review! 07/07/2011 01:16 am It's a shame that Buffy was still too traumatised to confront the Scoobies, but it probably more true to character that way. She's not the strong slayer at this point but a very hurt and scared young woman who has been assaulted by someone close to her whom she trusted. It takes a long time to come back from that kind of thing. Buffy really needs to contact Dawn though... and of course Xander is still rationalising his actions away... Thanks for the review. I'm still working on a couple of different possibilities for the big confrontation. Hopefully, my muse and I will work things out soon. Eyghon 07/07/2011 12:34 am
yay, an update. Buffy's reaction to her friends was heartbreaking. How long is the gang going to stay clueless? Could there have been a camera at Xander's place that filmed "that night"? Is Buffy's grief somehow going to end up sending a vengeance demon after Xander? It's funny, but I am still debating on a couple different ways this could go. No hidden cameras at Xander's though. That would be too easy. But I suppose being the author and all I should figure out some of the answers to these questions! Thanks for the review. Hopefully I will get caught up at work and be able to crank out another chapter soon. | |||
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