Another great piece of work - glad that I am doing a second reading.

Text   Yay! Go get him, Slayer!

Uhoh. . .

Willow's got some serious decisions to make, and I love how Tara agreed with Buffy -- and Buffy just realized (or maybe not just yet) that actually talking about something instead of hiding it away is always much better.

or - she could just kill him anyway.  :)

I just found this story last night and was able to read it today. It's incredibly compelling, and I want more now.  I was sorry to see there were no more chapters.  There are so very few stories written abouot this episode. I did a rewrite of it for my very first story, and it was incredibly sweet. Looking bock, I think it was so much so, one might get a cavity from reading. I ike yours much better. 

I was worried that he was going to hurt Anya a lot more. Good work on Willow, she of course want's to "fix" it. That should make me worried but I dont think she will try that now. She's still in denile about Xander which I get. It's hard to totaly change the way you think about a person you have known your entire life. Now Buffy gets to act, that should be good for her. And I wonder what Spike will wish for?

Another great chapter - really sweet Dawn / Buffy interaction and great portrayal of Xan and Willow at their most annoying!

God xanders kinda scary,hope Buffy gets to spike in time. Cant wait to fine out.

Fantastic to see Buffy getting her moxie back, she gave Willow some much needed home truths at last.  Love it.

Oh my gosh - and you stopped THERE!!!  This is one of the finest stories I have read and normally I do not read unfinished ones (they are too depressing, never having an ending).

Please, please keep this up, it is just terrific.

Many thanks,
Cheryl

Ok I get Willow & Xander been friends forever but she need to wake up sometimes people change for the worst. If she can't accept Buffy rules then she go, Xander could hurt anyone right now. And good for Buffy standing up for herself, plus Willow  I don't think Dawn (one person) could used up all the money plz!

Please update as soon as you can.

Really loved this chapter!!  Surprised that Halfrek may actually turn out to be helpful and I'm really glad that Tara was finally, well, Tara.  I'm beginning to think that maybe Willow and Xander both need to kicked out of the Scoobies.  Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one!

I wonder whether Willow will choose Buffy or Xander.... and how badly will Buffy hurt Xander for trying to dust Spike? Can't wait.......

Oh no, this is sounding like the end of this fic is near... wonder if Xander will survive or not, and if Buffy will have the strength to do whatever needs doing. In my opinion, if someone should kill Xander, it shouldn't be Spike, it's something Buffy needs to do. Will the others be witnesses to the showdown? I don't think they'd just let Buffy handle it by herself?