07/03/2015 08:10 am
I'm feeling totally miserable and it's only the first chapter - Great begining and I like how you did not have Spike in the story at all but went directly to his death - extremely painful for anyone who admires, respects and loves the character. BEST LINE for me: Spike had gone out as a small whisper of dust, unmourned except by her.
11/22/2011 01:49 am
Great Story BMS - Dawn was even good (barely possible I know).
“Last night you took over the leader role, remember? - I wasn't expecting this and it's a good twist. I was hoping she'd burn the house down with Giles in it, but maybe next chapter. :)
Thank you so much.
Never thought about the burning the house down, LOL. That would seem a bit extreme, even for a pissed off Slayer. :-)
Glad you liked it!
Never thought about the burning the house down, LOL. That would seem a bit extreme, even for a pissed off Slayer. :-)
Glad you liked it!
11/03/2011 11:28 pm
What a cracking start! I am going to read the next 3 chapters now, I'm sure this is going to be as good as your other fics.
Thanks so much for the vote of confidence!
Jane
11/02/2011 05:49 pm
Terrific start....
Gracias!
magnus374
11/01/2011 08:08 am
Good wrk on Buffys reaction and emotion.
Thank you kindly!
behind blue eyes
11/01/2011 02:33 am
Loved the start. You've captured Buffy's helpless wonderfully.
Thank you! I don't Buffy as a helpless person, but sometimes on the show she showed wayyyy more control than she had any reason to. I saw this idea (Spike dying at this point) as one that would truly be a last straw for Buffy.