Lorne is taking away all the fun!  Is the Light that goof Spike?

Lorne is taking away all the fun!  Is the Light that goof Spike?

Giles is being a pompous ass. Angel is his sanctimonious self and that never ends well. I love Lorne, hopefully he can help them. Poor Joyce she has no idea what's going on. I agree beating up Willy was bad form, but Giles and Angel don't agree and according to them they are always right. Can Xander get his butt kicked please?

MInutiae.  It's taken six chapters and quite a lot of unnecessary, repetitive dialogue to get us to the point where we actually start learning things and moving forward.  I'm still following the story, but the most interesting parts so far have been the snippets with Spike and Drusilla.  You write well,  you just need to consider trimming your dialogue a bit so that the flow is tighter and less rambling.

I wish I knew how to say that without seeming malicious.  I really don't mean it that way.  My first impression when reading the first few chapters was "minutiae" so that's how I wrote it.

Looking forward to seeing Buffy make her appearance.