Well - nice surprise - I really like how you changed the premise from Buffy Slayer to Buffy Guardian in training.  I think this will turn out to be extremely interesting - Buffy with women mentors and Buffy being forced to use her brain and understanding of people and the demon realms and not just Slayer Buffy, that frankly, IMO, was very narrow minded and dogmatic, with a great big slice of "quick to violence."