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Remenissions by adrianiling
Chapter: "Crushed"
03/28/2012 01:51 am
Don't posts chapter 1 if you're not planning on writing a chapter 2. That's my opinion. I like what you have so far and want to see it continue.
Also: there's a spot where Drusilla disappears into a "creek" in the wall. I think you meant to say "crack". You mentioned English isn't your first language - a creek is a small river.
Cheers!
Also: there's a spot where Drusilla disappears into a "creek" in the wall. I think you meant to say "crack". You mentioned English isn't your first language - a creek is a small river.
Cheers!
You're right, I meant to say "crack", sometimes I just confuse some words. Thank you for telling me, I'll fix it right now.
I'm definitely planning on continuing the story, I don't like leaving things unfinished; so far I have 5 chapters written.
Next chapter is already betaed, so I'll post it soon.
Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
I'm definitely planning on continuing the story, I don't like leaving things unfinished; so far I have 5 chapters written.
Next chapter is already betaed, so I'll post it soon.
Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
Behind Blue Eyes
03/27/2012 04:16 pm
Loved it! Wonderful job interweaving the episode and your own take. Looking forward to more! Oh, I love me some Avenged Sevenfold!!!!!
Thank you!! It's great to see someone likes Avenged Sevenfold too. Almost every chapter it's going to have some quotes either by Avenged Sevenfold or Marilyn Manson.....yeah I'm weird like that. lol
Again, thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
Again, thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
03/27/2012 09:18 am
You got Buffy's parrotting rhetoric perfectly.
Thank you very much for reading and leaving a review!
I really appreciate it.
Adriana.
I really appreciate it.
Adriana.
SeaPea
03/27/2012 04:06 am
A good start to your first Spuffy fic, Adriana! I want to see where you go with this.
Oh, thank you! I was really nervous about posting a fic, so I really apreciate encouragement.
I still don't know where I'm going with this story, but I have a few surprises planned. Next chapter coming up soon!
Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
I still don't know where I'm going with this story, but I have a few surprises planned. Next chapter coming up soon!
Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Adriana.
03/26/2012 12:45 am
Reminissions is not an English word and I don't think there is a variation on reminisce like that. There should be! Probably the closed word is Remembrances although that's not exactly the same. You have to be careful with titles since you spellchecker might not check words with all caps. MS Word doesn't, even the most recent version.
Well, I know reminissions is not really a word, it's the title of a song by Avenged Sevenfold. You see, I was listening to that song and it reminded me of challenge #494 and then decided to write a fic based on it. I thought the story should be called like the song that made me write it so, it's not a mistake but deliberately misspelled.
Anyway, thank you for noticing and calling me on it, I know there may be some mistakes the spellchecker might not fix, so, again, thanks.
Adriana.
Anyway, thank you for noticing and calling me on it, I know there may be some mistakes the spellchecker might not fix, so, again, thanks.
Adriana.
03/26/2012 12:29 am
Good job adrian - your English is excellent, too. Hope you'll continue.
Thank you! It's really difficult for me to write in a foreign language so I apreciate it when someone tells me I did it all right.
Thank you for reading and leavin a review.
Adriana.
Thank you for reading and leavin a review.
Adriana.
mike13z50
03/25/2012 11:40 pm
Interesting start, I don't think I've read a fanfic starting from this point. But, the soul was the main thing that Buffy couldn't get past, why she couldn't allow herself to love Spike. I assume he's either off on a soul quest or to get the chip out (serial killer in prison). Because that is the other thing, with the chip in she could never see that he had changed because he wanted to.
But I still think the soul was necessary for her to love him; he could do good without the soul, but he couldn't be good.
Looking forward to more.
But I still think the soul was necessary for her to love him; he could do good without the soul, but he couldn't be good.
Looking forward to more.
Hi, Mike, and thak you for your review!
I agree with you; the soul was necessary for Buffy to love Spike, but I think he could and did love her before the soul. I always thought the whole "you can't love without a soul" was just a line the Council (and Angel) fed Buffy to excuse her killing sentient beings (and to excuse his own actions in Angel's case).
And whether Spike is going to retrieve his soul or not, well, you'll find out soon, I promise. I'll be posting the next chapter as soon as I have it betaed.
Again, thak you for reading and leavin a review.
Adriana.
I agree with you; the soul was necessary for Buffy to love Spike, but I think he could and did love her before the soul. I always thought the whole "you can't love without a soul" was just a line the Council (and Angel) fed Buffy to excuse her killing sentient beings (and to excuse his own actions in Angel's case).
And whether Spike is going to retrieve his soul or not, well, you'll find out soon, I promise. I'll be posting the next chapter as soon as I have it betaed.
Again, thak you for reading and leavin a review.
Adriana.
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