More Toil and Trouble by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Four

Rabbit-moon
09/06/2014 12:53 pm

Great continuation of your Toil and Trouble saga!   You have such a mastery of Spuffy, their voices, their actions, and their banter!  So pitch perfect.  I just love reading your stories!
Love your bitch/Willow.  Everyone thinks Willow is so sweet and innocent, but she actually did some pretty reprehensible stuff in the series.  Im hoping for some serious comeuppance for Willow if she continues to be such an arrogant twit.
Looking forward to your next chapter.




 

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :)

09/04/2014 02:22 pm
I don't like this self-centred, arrogant Willow...
She's not very likeable just now...

09/04/2014 01:21 pm
More witty repartee enjoyed!  I hope Willow does not do too much more but I'm sure she will because of your title.  
Well, she's only got two ways to go - be better and more reasonable... or not...

09/04/2014 01:08 pm
Love your seriously unpleasant Willow, I think Giles has his hands full convincing her she needs anything but a free rein!  Even Xander is being reasonable, which makes a nice change.  Can't blame Spike for getting in a huff!  Great fun.
Thanks, Lou. Yeah, she's not at all willing to believe she shouldn't be able to have her way. Maybe Xander can talk some sense into her? Or not....

Kristen
09/04/2014 08:28 am
Why are u so good at this! I need more update soon please :)
In a day or so.  Thank you. :)

09/04/2014 02:44 am
I've always wondered about Willow - how could someone so intelligent be so stupid at the same time? OK, she's too young to have gained wisdom, but intelligent people should learn from their mistakes, right? Or maybe I'm too naive ;). Nice chapter :).
I think Willow is still too impressed with what she was able to do to think of any of it as a "mistake". And still pretty pissed off about having that power drained from her.