Challenge #578 What If I Loved You? Part 1 by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Chapter Two

07/28/2015 10:54 pm
A bit of honesty from both parties is making a world of difference.  Love it!
Thank you! Hope you enjoy the rest of it.

07/20/2015 05:59 pm
My favorite thing in this chapter was the Harmony bit.  Buffy let on to her jealousy which did not escape Spike.  
Buffy doesn't like to share her toys - even when she doesn't know they are going to be toys yet.

07/20/2015 04:58 pm
I like this challenge response so far.  I like the change to the Slayer conversation they have and how Spike found out about Buffy's first thought when it comes to a superpowered person.  I am curious to see what happens to the end of FFL though now that Spike isn't angry at her.  I feel like Spike being there for her after she found out about her Mom was a really important moment in their relationship.  I can't wait for more.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for taking time to tell me so. No worries. That important scene on the back porch is still going to happen.

07/20/2015 04:56 pm
Now, that's more like the way it should have gone, and would have if Buffy hadn't been so self-righteous and bitchy. 
Well, in fairness to Buffy, in canon it wasn't Spike who rescued her. But I do think she was unnecessarily mean and nasty to him in that episode.  Apparently no one every told her you catch more flies with honey. He was a bit of a jerk too, though...  I've made them both a little less antagonistic.