The claim is ok for the most part except that no one asked for it. They all just have to deal with it, because they have no choice. They basicly have been assaulted. It's a great idea if they'd only been given a choice. Again just my opinion. Waiting to see how this is all going to end.

excellent chapter...i think i like the idea of the familial claim...very intriguing, this story just gets better and better :)