Challenge #578 What If I Loved You? Part 1 by slaymesoftly
10/02/2015 03:31 pm
Love the banter. Looking forward to the demonstration patrol, but I'm a little concerned what 'test' the mage intends to do on Dawn, and what the result might be...
Thanks. The patrol could be more exciting than they expected... LOL
10/02/2015 05:07 am
I really, really enjoyed this chapter. The banter was a hoot and how they played the idiots from the council.
I've always liked Lydia, she reminds me of fangirls of JM. Nicely done.
Dawn was a clever little minx too with the instant teen attitude. I wonder about this mage though. I doubt it will be that easy to gat rid of these clowns.
Ah well, we'll see. I think it might be tricky dislodging Lydia. LOL
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