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Freedom by icemink 02/13/2011 06:21 am This is a very well crafted alternate reality tale! Really different. Great read. Thanks. :-) 05/19/2010 02:46 pm 06/04/2006 04:14 pm Chapter Six - The ice cream and chips were great - they did a good job brainwashing her didn't they? Chapter Seven I love this update - the girl and the ever present madness - really great story - I feel so sorrt for Buffy. Chapter Eight - WOW - just WOW! Chapter Nine - Can I kill Ms. Post - just a slow death - that is all - really *Growls* Chapter ten- Oh no what is going on? Looks concerned... runs to next chapter! 06/04/2006 03:41 pm Chapter four was lovely - i like the interaction and this alternate world that they are in. I noticed a slight typo - "She wasn't supposed to admit she was scarred" scarred instead of scared" but it didn't distract thought you might want to know - really lovely story so far! 06/04/2006 03:36 pm Chapter two was powerfully written - I love the set up, the despration, the madness that is seeping in. Chills running up and down my arms as I sprint for the next chapter! Chapter three - I love the faint edge of madness to Buffy - very nicely done. i loved the line thought you would be tired. Great update! 06/04/2006 03:27 pm My computer keeps crashing so i will probably leave multiple reviews - I enjoyed chapter one and the killing of Lydia - poor Lydia but i think she enjoyed it. Vry intrigiunging beginning and can't wait to see what happens next! *hugs* 05/10/2006 01:08 pm wow! This story is so good! gaillee 10/28/2005 03:48 pm Wow!!! I absolutely love this story. the interaction between Spike and Buffy is stupendously funny in the last chapter.
I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for a lot of fun! jane 10/27/2005 06:27 am I was expecting Buffy to have more trouble controlling her demon, but she seems to be a strong childe. I can't wait to see where Spikes taken her. Rider 10/22/2005 04:40 am Really liked the story but,,,, NASTY cruel liffhanger end to the last chapter. PLEASE continue!!! | |||
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