This is an interesting fic. I like how you portrait the people true to character, and hope you will update soon:)

Hey that story's great! I loved reading it. Well, what's written of it so far, anyway... The way you write Spike is awesome and your plot seems to be evolving rather well too. I like Dawn and I like Buffy and I like pretty much everything in here, which is pretty rare, I might add. I'll be keeping an eye on this fic then, see when you add a new chapter! Good job,

- YB

HOLY CRAP! I don't like the jars with vampire hearts of every lineage in them... and what does the Immortal *cough*asswipe*cough* have planned for Buffy ... you know I don't care ... Go DAWN, Go SPIKE!!!!

GO SPIKE! RUN! Hurry to find Buffy before it is too late. Damn Immortal. Hope Spike gets there in time. Look forward to more.

Grrrh I'm on tenterhooks waiting for the big revelation. Love it udate soon.

I really hope that they all can figure this out. Great update. always love Spike and can I just say GO DAWN..

Very interesting story, what is the Imortal wanker up to? Gonna have fun reading about it in the coming chapters.

excellent, would say more but barely awake :D