Stupid foot in mouth, bitch Buffy rides in again. {rolls her eyes} Great start to this one. I don't know why I hadn't reviewed on it before. I'm reading the other two chapters that you have up of this one next.

Nice touch - Spike's reaction to her immediate denial that they might have wanted it. I hope she feels bad!

I like Spike's comments on his wake up vision. What did happen to them and WTF were they doing in a bar? More please.

Excellent beginning...love it...please continue....

Loving this story so far; ending was great -- poor Spike, stupid, mean Buffy -- great lines though...dialogue is spot on, storyline is intriguing...i wanna know how they got there, too!!! Please update soon!! :)