This is such an intriguing take on the Key and her parent. Spike has his work dealing with Buffy and the incredibly stupid Scoobies. Hopefully he'll be able to figure out how to kill Glory without jumping of a tower. More please.

Buffy needs to get over herself. Xander needs to be slapped if he questions Spike one more time about it all. Glad to see Spike and Dawn in such a friendly and Father/Daughter type relationship. That is cool. Glad to see an update of this one after so long. {Smiles} Love it.

i absolutely love this story..Buffy needs to get over herself..She more than anyone should realize that Spike must really trust her to bring Dawn to them for help...i use to sometime wonder on the show if Dawn wasn't Spike daughter..but they never really went into who her father was...i like the fact that in this story she is Spike's daughter...

Really excellent update, like where this fic is going.

This is a great fic - I really like how protective Spike is of Dawn. Buffy needs to grow up and get with the program.

Well this is a very interesting story so far, I'm really interested in seeing how this will end.