Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Persistence of memory

11/23/2006 06:04 pm
yes, he does need to calm down...dawn would be dead right now if not for her..i really hope he realizes that right away...and maybe they're that much closer to figuring out what's going on...

08/21/2006 10:45 am
Ch 43- Oh my amazing! The truth is starting to come out and nothing is going to stop it. The truth can't be denied! *evil cackle* i love this story!

Verda
07/02/2006 12:52 pm
Freaking fabulous, girl, definately! So glad I got the clues you were leaving. Man Willow screwed up everywhere. All the possibilities are mind-blowing. What to read more but must try to get a few hours before I must get up. Planning my youngest's 21st birthday, and I keep forgetting to order the cake.

12/27/2005 01:01 pm
Origins and Origins: Revelations are two of the best pieces I've ever read. Every time I log on and see an update from Niamh, it makes my evening a little bit sweeter to know I have some quality writing to read and enjoy. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to what comes next. Oh, yeah, wanted to mention that you do a great job with tying in little details that seem insignificant but make all the difference.

vicki ohgodspike@pacbell.net
12/24/2005 04:08 am
oh my! i loved origins so very much. i had not intended to start this second part until it was done, as i have been hurt by WIPS before. but i loved origina so much that i printed this part up (336 pages so far) and read it. and now - well i'm on the edge of my seat all over the place. This story is just so freaking wonderful, fantastic and every other hyperbole you can think of. i am so sorry for all the shoulder problems you have been having - selfishly i need this story to be finished. now i am on edge and will just have to wait like all of us. and as for your author's note saying that somebody had criticized you, let he who has not written gorgeous fanfic not cast any stone. how dare they feel the right to criticize? let's see their work?? bastards! and god i know you are going to have willow get it BIG TIME and i just can't wait for that - you are right? plus xander, the asshole - him too, right? and of course, angel too? woman - you are a phenominal writer - this story and the original Origins are works of art, plain and simple. so let's all send healing vibes to nia so we can selfishly indulge ourselves in reading it. i'm in awe of you. thank you for writing this beautiful, beautiful work.

Amy
12/19/2005 03:19 am
I have put all of my life on hold to read this story. I don't do that sort of thing for just anyone, so believe me when I say this is the most awesome story I've ever read and am dying to see the next submission!

12/09/2005 01:31 pm
It’s excellent, outstanding, brilliant, superb, first-rate, dazzling, luminous, skillful, wonderful, stupendous, marvelous, and all around good. Can't wait for another update. :-D

Catrine
12/07/2005 03:17 am
Can`t wait to read what happens next. Excellent story!!!Keep up the good work!

Judy
12/03/2005 07:32 pm
Great update. This story is fanastic.

Stephanie
12/03/2005 07:09 pm
Incrediable story - I really loved this and love all the twists and turns it takes. I cannot wait to find out how they react to the knowledge of what WIllow has done. This was an incrediable update and a fab story!

Stephanie
12/03/2005 07:06 pm
Incrediable story - I really loved this and love all the twists and turns it takes. I cannot wait to find out how they react to the knowledge of what WIllow has done. This was an incrediable update and a fab story!

Kawaki
12/03/2005 02:09 am
Wow! It never occurred to me about Dawn. So what about Zander and Cordelia? They obviously don't remember she was hurt and is in the hospital. This story is one of my favorites and you're doing an excellent job keeping me engrossed.

Oracleholly
12/02/2005 03:22 pm
...is it any freaking good? YES you silly bint!!! It's great!!! Loved that Faith is doing the 'reveal' spell. Tara's stuttering is back (such an important detail) but she's getting hints and feelings that something's not right. Take your time honey -- you're health and your shoulder come first.

~*~Tasha~*~
12/02/2005 03:04 pm
Loved the update. Pappa Spike is so protective that he's getting ticked off at Kristen for taking the chance. I love the story, and I look forward to more.

Nikkole
12/02/2005 12:18 pm
Don't ever worry about this story not being good! I Don't think you could write it badly even if you tried! I am so hooked on this story I check back at least twice day to see if you have updated! GRAET chapter!!

12/02/2005 10:50 am
It's freaking great! She is who I thought but I can't imagine how hard it must be to write this and the ramifications of her coming back. Thanks so much for this chapter and we'll be waiting for more of Kirsten and the outing of Willow and punishing her severely.

fitz
12/02/2005 10:45 am
It seems like I've been waiting for the 'big reveal' since forever. Great job. I am so into this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just a fabulousn story

12/02/2005 09:53 am
Wonderful update! And I kinda feel bad for Kirsten. She gets to get chewed out by her Dad here and again when she gets back to her own time. Looking forward to the next update. -Lisa