Where Do I Stand? by Thianna
Chapter: 1 - My Hope

Verda
07/08/2006 06:08 am
Very beautifully written story. Can't wait to see what style of writing you chose, because writing in the first is very hard to write. Enjoying it very much.

02/16/2006 05:31 am
very good story so far...you make the reader feel Spike's desperate need for Dru, it almost hurts to read it...very engaging, well-written...like this very much

SpaceLord
01/31/2006 09:58 am
Well nice start but I think I prefer a third person perspective.

margaret
01/04/2006 02:18 am
like how the story is starting out, pov is fine interesting actually...please write more and it would be great if "elizabeth " could be sired by spike rather than any of the others(imho) thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
12/26/2005 08:27 am
In answer to your POV question ... either way is fine. You're doing a pretty good job of writing from Spike's POV. {Smiles} It gives the story a particular slant and air about it that is nice. Writing third person is often much easier to write, but you can still get things in there about how a character feels etc. So, either way is good. Always up to the writer of what they want to do or accomplish with the fic. The story itself is awesome. I love it. This is already shaping up to be a very interesting one. I look forward to more chapters.

vladt
12/24/2005 11:43 am
love the chapter. spike pov very interesting, and difficult for the writer; third person easier to lead the reader to the mindset you want them to have. from reading other of your works, i know pov doesn't matter, this will be a well written, enjoyable fic. thanks for writting. P.S. this is probably the longest review you will ever receive from me. thanks again
Thanks for the review. I know it might be a little difficult but I hope I'll be able to capture Spike's thoughts well.

idk5743228
12/24/2005 12:27 am
I love the beginning. I think third person does open the story to more possibilities. However, anyway you write it is going to be great. I can't wait to see where you take it.

12/23/2005 10:20 pm
I'm lazy and third person is easier to write (at least for me) so I'm going to have to say whatever is easiest for you!

12/23/2005 07:54 pm
I don't mind the Spike POV. ^.^ Can't wait to read more.