Life Eternal by Kyra Storm
Chapter: Chaps 12-15

10/23/2006 10:51 am
oh that is so sad - poor buffy no wonder she locked away all her emotions - to have to remember that! *pets buffy*

Verda
07/06/2006 01:44 pm
Oooooh so good. This is so great, now how is Spike going to get through to her? He was so close, love this story. Brilliant!

vladt
03/05/2006 06:55 am
this is a really good read. thanks

fallen_angel
02/18/2006 09:35 pm
ok ur Hindu mythology is so messed up that it cannot be anything other than disrespectful, it's like saying Jesus never died on the cross or something. Shiv and Parvati have two sons- Ganesh and Kartik, both are Gods. Pralad was a little boy and his father was killed by an incarnation of Vishnu many years ago. Infact Vishnu had taken that particular inarnation for the sole purpose of killing Hirakashyap. By sugesting that Pralad's dad is still alive u r saying that a God failed to do his duty and secondly by having spike do that job u are giving him that statusof a god. Hindu mythology is very close knit and the myths have ptretty much a definite begining and ending. Such mythology can not be easily manipulated. Here u have given ur story flaws. u'll hate me for saying all this but i had to point this out cos i luv ur story and these flaws are kind of taking away the magic of it. contact me at: crazy-insane-girl@hotmail.com
if want a clear up or something cos ur manipulations of hindu mythology are like someone saying that Jesus never died on the cross and that in 2011 Spike had to do it.