Your story is facinating,why don´t you finished it?
Please continue,its thrilling to read! :-D
I can relate to the feelings of Buffy in this story.If you continue,please don´t let her die.Thank you for writing it :-)

ahhhh!!! kick him off, kick him off!...lol...sorry kinda got into it right there....*grin* great chapter!

Awesome! Please update soon!!

OMG! Evil cliffie! Will Spike save her? Better yet, will Spike mess up Captain Cardbored? More story please.

That was a rather cruel place to stop! I like morose Spike who has the plans but not the follow through. And Buffy, if she woudl just admit some truths to herself she could move on and be happy. I hope you're all fired up to write more of this.

All right now that was an evil cliff hanger if I ever saw one. Darn it. More please.

WOw, what a cliffy! How could you leave it there? Update soon!

oh bad evil cliffhanger, BAD!!! I'm so glad you're writing on this fic again. I love it! Hope to find out what happens soon because this is just too good to wait patiently

Fab chap! Lots of internal angst lol. Your voices are all very accurate, too. A lot of authors make Riley into some raving lunatic, but you give him a very authentic feel. Looking forward to more :)

wow, that was one cliffy. Can we say, next chapter please?

Um, can you say "evil cliff hanger?" Update soon, I hope?